求教 gwd 8-2

starrysea

Q2:

Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and compo ser, produced a body of work both rooted  in the stride -piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.

A. Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted

B. Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both

C. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted

D. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted

E. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both

请问一下B为何不对，而且E中Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk是否可以理解成Jazz pianist 和composer Thelonious Monk不是同一人，那样就有歧义了。

LES

先编辑了一下你的帖子，字太大了，没办法在一页上显示。

这题的关键是看到both就要找and，而且两者后面的东东要对称，由于in在未划线部分，所以看到Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington知道肯定不是和前面的both对称，再往后看发现yet in，说明both有问题，快速把both排除了，只剩C、D选项。由于C选项倒置了原题的主从关系 － 把主句改成了从句，且变成没有主句，所以错。

B，E的错误显而易见了吧。

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-8-3 9:31:17编辑过]

perpetual

这样说是选d 啊。thank LES!

tweib

les版主分析得好，C　D最主要的错误如les所说

补充一点：

选项C中a body of work rooted 没有D中a body of work that was rooted好

原因rooted只能修饰最接近它的名词,that rooted则能修饰到前面名词词组的中心词，即body，根据句意，rooted修饰body才是恰当

mickyma

请问这个Root怎么理解？

是作品root in the tradition 还是作者root呢？

因为后面是说he stand apart from the main stream,对应的也应该是人而不应该是作品呀．

Ｃ能不能看成rooted是谓语,who produced a body of work 是修饰语呢?

请ＮＮ们指点

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-9-11 10:09:51编辑过]

tweib

问得好啊，我就没注意到：

1、首先如果C选项，rooted在句中的位置就会有很多歧义，一个是作定语修饰前面名词，一个就是如你所说，肯定不好，不如D清晰

2、rooted后面接in，说明只能做不及物动词，词典上“根源在于,来源于[(+in)]”，只能是修饰a body of work

LES

以下是引用mickyma在2004-9-11 10:08:00的发言：

请问这个Root怎么理解？

是作品root in the tradition 还是作者root呢？

因为后面是说he stand apart from the main stream,对应的也应该是人而不应该是作品呀．

Ｃ能不能看成rooted是谓语,who produced a body of work 是修饰语呢?

请ＮＮ们指点

如果rooted要做主句的谓语，那么它前面应该有“，”与前面的非限制性定语从句断开。

ricky663

我就是被这个WAS ROOTED给搞糊涂了，才会去选不是那么对称的A的，D什么都好，就是WAS ROOTED 不通。

rhod

一般that was rooted这种选项在OG里是错误的, 因为不简洁.

但是现在ETS越来越狡猾, 倾向于在这些effective的问题上搅混水.

rings

想补充问一下,关于句子完整性的问题,, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.,完整的句子应该用分号链接,但在这里为什么yet前面是逗号啊?我哪里理解错了?