几道语法改错请教

albert

1. Some of the most celebrated publicity stunts while the history of radio were associated with Grace Allen

2. Laminated safety glass is produced with combining alternate layers of flat glass and plastic

3. The Canadian Province of Newfoundland has a rocky coast, a moisture climate and probably the best cod-fishing areas in the world.

Diana

1. Some of the most celebrated publicity stunts while the history of radio were associated with Grace Allen
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D中were改成was

2. Laminated safety glass is produced with combining alternate layers of flat glass and plastic
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B中with改成by

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light

3. The Canadian Province of Newfoundland has a rocky coast, a moisture climate and probably the best cod-fishing areas in the world.

我會選 D areas→ area
但是我覺得 a rocky coast, a moisture climate 沒有對稱，也許改成 a moisty climate 比較好，不知道這樣對不對

困难是弹簧

第三题同意lightMM。

wqhe2000

第三题选mositure->moist
mositure名词，什么修饰climate?这是托福常考的嘛，moist climate 在google.com会查很多。
areas没错，表示一大面地方，无需平行，我觉得托福常考的平行通常是词性平行，
或者是 a *** of 单数，单数，单数。

albert

以下是引用Diana在2003-6-11 11:29:00的发言：
1. Some of the most celebrated publicity stunts while the history of radio were associated with Grace Allen
※※※※
D中were改成was

2. Laminated safety glass is produced with combining alternate layers of flat glass and plastic
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B中with改成by

先发，回头再看

1. 刚看了“高分语法” 上是把 while 改成 in...我觉得有道理。
2. B吗？ 我觉得by后面跟的是动作执行者，而这里COMINING。。。。不是动作执行者。。我觉得A safety应改为 safe...但没把握

albert

以下是引用wqhe2000在2003-6-11 20:59:00的发言：
第三题选mositure->moist
mositure名词，什么修饰climate?这是托福常考的嘛，moist climate 在google.com会查很多。
areas没错，表示一大面地方，无需平行，我觉得托福常考的平行通常是词性平行，
或者是 a *** of 单数，单数，单数。

我同意WQHE2000的说法。。可是我看的“高分语法”上面竟然说是A has 改成have...我不明白。。。不知道有谁看过网上下载的高分语法？？

Diana

以下是引用albert在2003-6-11 21:36:00的发言：

1. 刚看了“高分语法” 上是把 while 改成 in...我觉得有道理。
2. B吗？ 我觉得by后面跟的是动作执行者，而这里COMINING。。。。不是动作执行者。。我觉得A safety应改为 safe...但没把握

1、对了，stunts在这里应该是名词复数。上午太匆忙，还以为stunts做动词，现在才发现时态都不对，呵呵，不好意思。
2、Laminated safety glass是一个完整短语，夹层安全玻璃。

toefl_2003

综上所述：( I am sure the answers are 200% right.)
1. while ---- in
2. safety ---- safe （是安全玻璃，不是安全的玻璃）
3. moisture ---  moist

wqhe2000

safety glass 没错的，大家有没有观看新东方语法？？
常见的名词修饰名词：safety glass,exhibition flight,color monitor,beauty salon.
表特定含义。
还有把safety glass 在google.com查一下就知老外有没有这个用法。