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oremping

因为：主语是“Rising inventories"而不是“ inventories”

Is 主语 singlar?
        

judiwind2006

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roric

这不是OG11上的题吗，记的最深刻的就是解释中对IF和WHEN作了区别

OG11-8       :        Diction + Logical predication

1. The modifying phrase when ... sales is needlessly difficult to understand. 2. The adverb correspondingly is incorrectly and ambiguously used; using the adjective corresponding to modify increases in sales makes the intended meaning more clear.  3. Unaccompanied is not wrong but not accompanied puts greater emphasis on the negative. 4、When indicates a period of time; if indicates a condition. If is preferable here.

A       Correspondingly is awkward and ambiguous;
    when is used to refer to a condition

B        Plural subject inventories
      does not agree with the singular verb
     leads; when is used to refer to a condition

C       Past tense were indicates a completed event, but can lead indicates a possibility that continues; when is used to refer to a condition

D        Correspondingly increased sales is awkward and unclear; verb (leads) does not agree with the subject (inventories)

E       Correct. If properly introduces a condition in this sentence; not accompanied emphasizes the negative;
    corresponding modifies
    increases in saler, the modifier is clear and comprehensible.

所以11楼错了

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-8-23 16:04:31编辑过]

itokinblue

哎呀～我也这道题目搞不懂撒！！

I do not know why the subject is "inventories" rather than "rising inventories".为什么偶就不能把它当做一个整体考虑呢？（虽然从选项来说并不影响我做题目，可是nn们说要把og吃透的～～～～～～

那个什么possibly和can的问题新东方老师说过，i have got it～

chrisfang

B的错最大是在于用了leads,主语是inventories复数

phylicia

可是Rising inventories和increases in sales不是不平行吗？一个是库存，后一个是增长的量．

lichabrend

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翼adobe

1、请问一下，corresponding（ly）位置变化怎么影响句意了?
E中，by corresponding increases in sales
A中，correspondingly by increases in sales
就是“觉得”A不合适吗？
2、而且也不明白为啥that从句用would虚拟
3、rising inventories是不是也可以看做动名词作主语的，只是possibly leads这儿错了，所以只能把它看成inventories是主语？

明白了when/if，和can/possibly，能选对的，但是觉得这样选的是不是有点运气的成分，因为我正好想到了when/if，can/possibly的差别，可是假如再多看几眼，就会被那些问题绕进去了，浪费时间。

请大家指正！！！