A:“making it a crime punishable ”是一个squinting structure;“a United States citizen hold” hold应为held; "hat a United States citizen hold"容易被误解为imprisonment的定语从句 B:“a United States citizen hold” hold应为held; "hat a United States citizen hold"容易被误解为imprisonment的定语从句;不知道with用法对不? C:“made it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen holding”将一个美国公民定为一个crime,distortion E:due to不好;being多余;makes导致时态inconsistense |