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31#
发表于 2006-9-10 22:04:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用akelee在2005-10-1 23:38:00的发言:

Q33:

Competition in the mid-nineteenth century by large western farms gradually caused farmers in Pennsylvania to turn to livestock raising, but before that it was predominantly grain-producing.

  1. Competition in the mid-nineteenth century by large western farms gradually caused farmers in Pennsylvania to turn to livestock raising, but before that it was predominantly grain-producing.  
  2. Once predominantly a grain-producing state, competition in the mid-nineteenth century from large western farms gradually was causing
                        Pennsylvania’s farmers to turn to livestock raising.  
  3. Pennsylvania’s farmers were gradually caused to turn to livestock raising by competition from large western farms in the mid-nineteenth century, but before that it was predominantly a grain-producing state.
  4. It was once predominantly grain-producing, but competition in the mid-nineteenth century by large western farms was gradually causing Pennsylvania’s farmers to turn to livestock raising.  
  5. Pennsylvania was once a predominantly grain-producing state, but competition in the mid-nineteenth century from large western farms gradually caused the state’s farmers to turn to livestock raising.  

請問 B, C, D 在時態上是不是也有問題呢??

32#
发表于 2007-10-21 01:03:00 | 只看该作者

我觉得A中THAT不能这样单独用,必须要有说明性或修饰性的东西来限定它,如:

THAT MEN / THAT OF STH

或者是用于比较中的替代

33#
发表于 2007-12-25 12:30:00 | 只看该作者
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34#
发表于 2009-2-11 17:30:00 | 只看该作者

because of 不是只能跟简单的名词短语么?  下面的算一个名词短语么?》

虚心求教啊!

Because of a law passed in 1933 making it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold

35#
发表于 2009-6-24 00:18:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用Maggieyin在2004-10-29 1:28:00的发言:

我的理解如下,不知对不对,请讨论。

Q22:

On account of a law passed in 1993, making it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold gold in the form of bullion or coins, immigrants found that on arrival in the United States they had to surrender all of the gold they had brought with them.





  1. On account of a law passed in 1993, making it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold
                    逻辑关系不对,making 分词短语主语必须和On account of 短语主语一致。
  2. With a law passed in 1933 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold
                    主谓搭配错误,a United States citizen hold, 但是a law 和makes没有问题,因为法律,风俗习惯应使用一般现在时。
  3. A law passed in 1933 that made it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen holding 句子不完整,A law passed in 1933 that 。。。, Immigrant found that
  4. Because of a law passed in 1933 making it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold
                    正确选项
  5. Due to a law being passed in 1933 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold 分词时态错误,1933年的事不能再being passed 了。

Q27:

Competition in the mid-nineteenth century by large western farms gradually caused farmers in Pennsylvania to turn to livestock raising, but before that it was predominantly grain-producing.

  1. Competition in the mid-nineteenth century by large western farms gradually caused farmers in Pennsylvania to turn to livestock raising, but before that it was predominantly grain-producing.
                        it 指代不明。
  2. Once predominantly a grain-producing state, competition in the mid-nineteenth century from large western farms gradually was causing Pennsylvania’s farmers to turn to livestock raising.
                        逻辑关系错误,Once predominantly 的主语是competition in the mid
  3. Pennsylvania’s farmers were gradually caused to turn to livestock raising by competition from large western farms in the mid-nineteenth century, but before that it was predominantly a grain-producing state.
                        it 指代不明,同时caused by 相距遥远
  4. It was once predominantly grain-producing, but competition in the mid-nineteenth century by large western farms was gradually causing Pennsylvania’s farmers to turn to livestock raising.
                        it 指代不明。
  5. Pennsylvania was once a predominantly grain-producing state, but competition in the mid-nineteenth century from large western farms gradually caused the state’s farmers to turn to livestock raising.正确选项。

同意,高手

36#
发表于 2009-8-24 12:31:00 | 只看该作者
 

Q27:

Competition in the mid-nineteenth century by large western farms gradually caused farmers in Pennsylvania to turn to livestock raising, but before that it was predominantly grain-producing.

  1. Competition in the mid-nineteenth century by large western farms gradually caused farmers in Pennsylvania to turn to livestock raising, but before that it was predominantly grain-producing.
                it指代不清,可以指代competition,P,livestock.但个人认为选择时可以暂且保留。
  2. Once predominantly a grain-producing state, competition in the mid-nineteenth century from large western farms gradually was causing Pennsylvania’s farmers to turn to livestock raising.
                once那句是修饰P的,但是P跑到好远的地方去了,结果看起来如同修饰competition,整句读下来压抑,有头重脚轻的感觉,此外主语已经不明确了。
  3. Pennsylvania’s farmers were gradually caused to turn to livestock raising by competition from large western farms in the mid-nineteenth century, but before that it was predominantly a grain-producing state. it同样指代不清楚,还用了个被动。
  4. It was once predominantly grain-producing, but competition in the mid-nineteenth century by large western farms was gradually causing Pennsylvania’s farmers to turn to livestock raising.
                it应该是指代P的,但P又跑得很远了,此外整句读下来有种想断气的感觉
  5. Pennsylvania was once a predominantly grain-producing state, but competition in the mid-nineteenth century from large western farms gradually caused the state’s farmers to turn to livestock raising.据说整句划线的话重心可以改变。否则我认为E其实变了重心,现在把E和A对比,感觉E表达清晰些/
37#
发表于 2010-7-6 15:07:45 | 只看该作者
回楼上的,这里的it是make it adj.结构中的it,做形式宾语,不存在指代不明的情况!:)
-- by 会员 qiandonkey (2005/9/3 23:46:00)





我的理解是:

如果这个it做形式宾语,那么后面应该有that引导的宾语从句才对

A.On account of a law passed in 1993, making it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States
citizen holdB.With a law passed in 1933 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold
C.A law passed in 1933 that made it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen holding
D.Because of a law passed in 1933 making it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States
citizen to hold
E.Due to a law being passed in 1933 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States
citizen to hold

有that引导的只有A、B,CDE没有that——如果不论AB的其他错误,CDE应该首先排除才对

你们看呢?
38#
发表于 2010-8-2 20:18:54 | 只看该作者
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