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As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens(1835-1921) who was, as many of his contemporaries were, deeply interested in Oriental themes.

A.As a pianist ,composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921), who was

B.As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of earned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921) was among the most gifted and versatile Musicians of his time and having been

C.Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens(1835-1921), and he was

D.Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921) was among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time and was

E.Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921), who was, among the musicians of his time, one of the most gifted and versatile, had been

选D 因为D最平行。
但是做题的时候还是有点小疑惑。B是肯定排除的，因为不平行。E也肯定排除
但是C我是觉得不平行 因为一个倒装句和and后面是不平行的，不知道是不是这样？并且A也有些疑惑。请指出A错在哪里。。
谢谢

sanlingjie

A用了倒装句，这样就把主语Camille Saint-Saens和修饰它的modifier “As a pianist ,composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects”割裂开来了，这是不对的。

C除了和A一样的问题，还有就是你说的不平行了。

裤裤melo

As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens(1835-1921) who was, as many of his contemporaries were, deeply interested in Oriental themes.

A.As a pianist ,composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921), who was

B.As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of earned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921) was among the most gifted and versatile Musicians of his time and having been

C.Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens(1835-1921), and he was

D.Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921) was among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time and was

E.Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921), who was, among the musicians of his time, one of the most gifted and versatile, had been

我说我的做法，lz参考，可能比较非主流。。。lz其实可以按照句子的表述把意思翻译出来念给自己听。。。

A.As a pianist ,composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921), who was
感觉这个句子不好是因为among使得主语和之前的as结构隔太远。。。lz一读就觉得别扭有木有啊。。。


B.As a pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of earned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921) was among the most gifted and versatile Musicians of his time and having been
这个and太多。。。结构不对。。。。



C.Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, among the most gifted and versatile musicians of his time was Camille Saint-Saens(1835-1921), and he was

这个和a错得一样啊亲~然后那个and也有问题对吧

d。。。。翻译一下，有木有觉得表达十分优美啊。。。。


E.Pianist, composer, scholar, and essayist on a variety of learned subjects, Camille Saint-Saens (1835-1921), who was, among the musicians of his time, one of the most gifted and versatile, had been
among结构修饰的东西不对。。。干嘛没事用had been。。。


我不知道我这么讲清楚不~其实我是想和lz说用逻辑语义解题。。。感觉一下gmac的写句子的方式，选最优美最简洁最直接那个~

糊涂的小黑

找到了句子的主语的话，这个A排除是一定了的。倒装是为了避免头重脚轻，这个目的这里明显没到达

酱子啊

找到了句子的主语的话，这个A排除是一定了的。倒装是为了避免头重脚轻，这个目的这里明显没到达

-- by 会员 糊涂的小黑 (2011/10/31 20:18:48)

nice...........

欠抽的猫

sanlingjie 发表于 2011-10-31 15:42
A用了倒装句，这样就把主语Camille Saint-Saens和修饰它的modifier “As a pianist ,composer, scholar, an ...

非常感谢！没有注意到割裂开这一点！~

wendy94wendy

想问下为什么同位语不加冠词呢 差点因为这个直接排除了