Season 2——manhattan 40（已点评）

reiwanglu

语法点都写得差不多了。。

nhelpn

E吧

balapupu

来支持bat的喽~原来糊糊也在啊~~~果然长时间不做语法不行了~~做错了~~以后跟着bat练了~~

geniealice

It was not long after the 1930s commenced that such baritone singers as Bing Crosby and Russ Columbo contributed to the popularization of a type of romantic, soothing singing that came to be called “crooning.”
A It was not long after the 1930s commenced that such baritone singers as Bing Crosby and Russ Columbo contributed to
B Not long after the commencement of the decade of the 1930s, baritone singers such as Bing Crosby and also Russ Columbo decided to contribute in
C Not long after the 1930s commenced, baritone singers like Bing Crosby and Russ Columbo contributed to
D Not long after the beginning of the 1930s commencement, baritone singers like Bing Crosby and Russ Columbo had contributed to
E It was not long after the 1930s commenced that baritone singers such as Bing Crosby and Russ Columbo had contributed in

-- by 会员 superbat28 (2011/10/27 9:54:39)

A
it形式主语指代that后面整句，最后部分是同位语

B，the 1930s和decade冗余，名词形式不如commenced修饰1930s简洁，and also没必要且貌似要加强Russ，contribute to sth
C，举例不用like
D，the beginning和commencement重复，like举例错，时态没有一般过去与had done配
E，contribute in不对

感觉C中Not long after the 1930s commenced，有点别扭，但说不太明白问题在哪？
如果C中没有like用错的问题的话，是不是一个正确选项呢？？等讨论总结：）
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开始在纠结A，因为不知道主语在哪，后来发现 such baritone singers as和 Baritone singers such as 都是可以的，找到2个题：
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还有prep笔记的P118 162题，B选项的解释中说的such B as和 B such as都可以。

这就是说such n as这部分是做主语的是吗？Mark一下，求确认：）

fox0923

恩恩，知道bala最近很忙，不过SC悬赏令还是要做的，了解到很多不足啊

hhou

怎么木有第三季了？？？期待ING.............

庭草绿

第三季就开始了，才发现呢~~   以后会更贴的。辛苦LZ了

balapupu

It was not long after the 1930s commenced that such baritone singers as Bing Crosby and Russ Columbo contributed to the popularization of a type of romantic, soothing singing that came to be called “crooning.”
A It was not long after the 1930s commenced that such baritone singers as Bing Crosby and Russ Columbo contributed to--->强调句，这种句意要看好几遍才懂呢~~R
B Not long after the commencement of the decade of the 1930s, baritone singers such as Bing Crosby and also Russ Columbo decided to contribute in-->also多余，decide多余改变句意，contribute in 搭配错.
C Not long after the 1930s commenced, baritone singers like Bing Crosby and Russ Columbo contributed to-->like 表举例，错，commence 后面无宾语.
D Not long after the beginning of the 1930s commencement, baritone singers like Bing Crosby and Russ Columbo had contributed to-->like 表示举例错，had时态错，commencement名词没有动词形式简洁.
E It was not long after the 1930s commenced that baritone singers such as Bing Crosby and Russ Columbo had contributed in-->had 时态错，contribute in 搭配错

小狮子要发奋

弱弱问一句，这是个什么练习呀，我怎么加进来捏

南瓜0729

举例用such as 排除CD
contribute to固定搭配 选A