求解一道语法题

ericwilliam

When drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for female enfranchisement.

(A) When drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for female enfranchisement.

(B) Including a call for female enfranchisement, a draft of the Declaration of Sentiments was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848 that Elizabeth Cady Stanton wrote.

(C) When the Declaration of Sentiments drafted by Elizabeth Cady Stanton was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Convention in 1848, a call for female enfranchisement had been included in it.

(D) A call for female enfranchisement, included in Elizabeth Cady Stanton's draft of the Declaration of Sentiments in 1848, that was adopted by the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention.

(E) When Elizabeth Cady Stanton drafted the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, she included in it a call for female enfranchisement.

答案是E，可是为什么C不对呢？

bonfin

when表示同时。而C中的后半句是过去完成时，表示发生在另一个动作之前。

ericwilliam

E中的it不会产生式 Declaration of Sentiments 还是Falls Women's Rights Convention的歧义么？求解释

酱子啊

E中的it不会产生式 Declaration of Sentiments 还是Falls Women's Rights Convention的歧义么？求解释

-- by 会员 ericwilliam (2011/10/29 15:54:09)

个人觉得in it 多余 完全没必要加。。

Michiko54

E中的it不会产生式 Declaration of Sentiments 还是Falls Women's Rights Convention的歧义么？求解释

-- by 会员 ericwilliam (2011/10/29 15:54:09)

个人觉得It指代Declaraion of Sentiments,句子的意思是当她修改这个法案的时候，把XX加进去这个法案里，it就指代法案，Falls Women's Rights Covention前面是at,感觉是个地点状语（不确定哦），如果是地点状语的话it肯定不能指代它，从语法角度来讲，Falls Women's Rights Covention出现在时间状语从句里的一个定语从句，主句是和时间状语从句并列的，应该优先指代时间状语中的名词~~~~