Season two——manhattan 21（ Italy's top anti-Mafia prosecutor）

Jimmyzhang2012

选A 考点可以归纳为:同位语需要对修饰对象具有解释力
       B      famous because of “The Godfather,” 不能修饰 prosecutor
       C      famous because of “The Godfather,” 不能修饰 mobster
       D      和A选项相比 near to those he most trusted 夹心修饰 即可以修饰prosecutor，也可以修饰mobster 不对
       E       被动不及主动表达清晰 明确

innerwarrior

嘎嘎，终于开始新一轮了。。。
21. According to Italy's top anti-Mafia prosecutor, the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of the “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted.
       A       the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather” and near to those he mosttrusted
       B       famous because of “The Godfather,” theailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he mosttrusted
       C       the ailing mobster, famous because of“The Godfather,” came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he mosttrusted
       D      near to those he most trusted, the ailingmobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather”
       E       Corleone, famous because of “The Godfather,” was the town that the ailing mobster came to take refuge in because it was near to those he most trusted
解释：根据意大利首席反黑手党的检察官报道，这个生病的歹徒来到C这个地方来避难，C这个地方因为“教父”而有名，并且C这个地方靠近那些这个犯人最信任的地方。
我选A
根据according to打头，后面必须是对象，所以排除BD。
C的含义变成了这个歹徒因为"教父"很有名。
E的含义变成了据报道，C是一个town。意思有误。

Zidia

A
B. famous because of “The Godfather,” 夹心修饰
C. famous because of“The Godfather,” 用于修饰the ailing mobster，而原句是用于修饰a town (Corleone)，改变了原句意思
D.  near to those he most trusted，夹心修饰
E. 原句的逻辑意思被改变了，变成ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone 是因为Corleone was near to those he most trusted，原句中没有这样的因果关系。

最终结论就是四个选项全部改变了A的逻辑意思，而A的逻辑意思我个人是看不出来有什么问题，所以选A

不过我有疑问就是those指代的是什么。

ropingmoon

这题我怎么觉得似曾相识呢。。。我依稀记得我还问过那个those指代什么的啊。。哎哟喂。。。衰老了么这是，肿么想不起来了+_+

21. According to Italy's top anti-Mafia prosecutor, the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of the “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted.
句意：根据意大利最高反黑手党检察官，那个近况不太好的罪犯把C当作了避难所，因为C因为其“教父”而闻名而且距离那些他熟悉的人比较近。  
A       the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted
B       famous because of “The Godfather,” theailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he most trusted
famous跟在prosecutor的后面，引发语义不详，原意修饰C但是这里感觉好像是说的prosecutor.
       C       the ailing mobster, famous because of“The Godfather,” came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he mosttrusted
形容词famous跟在名词mobster的后面，语义混乱
       D      near to those he most trusted, the ailingmobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather”
he指代不明，应该知道mobster而不是prosecutor
       E       Corleone, famous because of “The Godfather,” was the town that the ailing mobster came to take refuge in because it was near to those he most trusted
后面的句子里面，it指代不明，因为最近的名词是refuge，而本意应该是指代the town C.

正确答案：A

naiwm009

还是原句比较顺，C有些awkward。
何时公布答案啊。。

balapupu

21. According to Italy's top anti-Mafia prosecutor, the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of the “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted.
A the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted?虽然觉得结构不是很平行，但是句意是正确的。
B famous because of “The Godfather,” the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he most trusted—》改变句意，变成了歹徒有名。。。
C the ailing mobster, famous because of “The Godfather,” came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he most trusted—》同C
D near to those he most trusted, the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather”—》改变句意，变成了歹徒靠近。。。
E Corleone, famous because of “The Godfather,” was the town that the ailing mobster came to take refuge in because it was near to those he most trusted—》随意添加的因果关系错。。。
逻辑语义啊！！！！！！！！！！！！

南瓜0729

21. According to Italy's top anti-Mafia prosecutor, the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of the “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted.
A the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted
B famous because of “The Godfather,” the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he most trusted
C the ailing mobster, famous because of “The Godfather,” came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he most trusted
D near to those he most trusted, the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather”
E Corleone, famous because of “The Godfather,” was the town that the ailing mobster came to take refuge in because it was near to those he most trusted

选A
BCD modifier的修饰对象都改变
E逻辑意思改变 句子重心改变

maxiv

21. According to Italy's top anti-Mafia prosecutor, the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of the “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted.

A the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted
those指代者不明

B famous because of “The Godfather,” the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he most trusted
两个clause修饰主语

C the ailing mobster, famous because of “The Godfather,” came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he most trusted


D near to those he most trusted, the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather”
he离the godfather过远

E Corleone, famous because of “The Godfather,” was the town that the ailing mobster came to take refuge in because it was near to those he most trusted
wordy

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单词（尤其是动词）不会导致猜错了，需要记住refuge

the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone
这句理解成了，有病的龙虾(mobster )在Corleone被拒绝(refuge)了
实际是生病的暴徒在corleone得到庇护

maxiv

21. According to Italy's top anti-Mafia prosecutor, the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of the “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted.
A the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted
B famous because of “The Godfather,” the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he most trusted
C the ailing mobster, famous because of “The Godfather,” came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he most trusted
D near to those he most trusted, the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather”
E Corleone, famous because of “The Godfather,” was the town that the ailing mobster came to take refuge in because it was near to those he most trusted

1，he指代模糊。AC错。
2 famous because of “The Godfather,”应该修饰town。BCE错。
3，wordy。it指代模糊。E错。

正解D


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12/29第二遍：读D选项的时候，没有连着未划线部分一起读，导致修饰错误没有看出来。

Royzhang0929

回帖是美德，决定跟着看下去~