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主谓一致；伴随状语；句子完整性；对衬

A：is错；个人觉得encompassing much of the human condition修饰不清

B：is错；also不能连接两个句子；encompassing much of the human condition是一个squinting modifier

C：run-on sentence；deals单数不一致

D：正确

E：run-on sentence；are dealing时态inconsistent

小女公子

The themes that Rita Dove explores in her poetry is universal, encompassing much of the human condition while occasionally she deals with racial issues.

1. is universal, encompassing much of the human condition while occasionally she deals


2. is universal, encompassing much of the human condition, also occasionally it deals


3. are universal, they encompass much of the human condition and occasionally deals


4. are universal, encompassing much of the human condition while occasionally dealing


5. are universal, they encompass much of the human condition, also occasionally are dealing

句子的主语不是sb啊，这样while后面也能省？？？

小女公子

看清楚了， 主语是themes…………当我没来过……

seasnow

themes为什么能deal with呢？不太明白地说，谁能翻译一下？谢谢！

seasnow

和。。。有关？涉及？

latuan1982

估计是的。。

chinaht1

Thank you,nn men

lulu_odin

明白了

bylavender

查了字典，想明确一点：
also只有副词词性，没有连词词性

latinjazz

1. is universal, encompassing much of the human condition while occasionally she deals
               
2. is universal, encompassing much of the human condition, also occasionally it deals
               
3. are universal, they encompass much of the human condition and occasionally deals
               
4. are universal, encompassing much of the human condition while occasionally dealing
               
5. are universal, they encompass much of the human condition, also occasionally are dealing

主词为themes, (1), (2)用单数动词is, （3)用deals, 错

＝>剩(4), (5)比较

（4)以while为连接词, 平衡encompassing与dealing, 合乎平衡用法, 正确

（5)原句句意为themes做了两件事, （5)试图以also做连接词平衡are universal与are dealing造成平衡用法错误, 使they只修饰themes而改变句意

个人浅见, 有错误请告知