OG12-88的问题

wbhsky · 发表于 2011-9-16 00:16:15

Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and
composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the
stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and
Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from
the mainstream jazz repertory.
(A) Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and
composer, produced a body of work both rooted
(B) Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer,
produced a body of work that was rooted both
(C) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk,
who produced a body of work rooted
(D) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk
produced a body of work that was rooted
(E) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk
produced a body of work rooted both

答案是D，但是我想问D中 Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk
会不会产生歧义，变成是PIANIST 和一个叫TM的COMPOSER??
还有OG 对AB的解释是A Th e relative clause introduces wordiness and
confusion.
B Th e appositive introduces wordiness and
unnecessary grammatical complexity. 但是为什么呢，请问大家啊？？

wbhsky · 发表于 2011-9-18 23:29:30

？？NOBODY?

wbhsky · 发表于 2011-9-19 12:45:42

upupupup

cynthia1991 · 发表于 2011-9-19 13:29:13

因为出现了who was所以wordy。而d就是把头衔放在人名前面，连同位于都算wordy了，想象一下，我们平常也会说professor Smith，差不多就是这意思。

wbhsky · 发表于 2011-9-19 23:59:31

谢谢LS回答！不过还有一个疑问没有解决……就是主语会不会变成两部分人的问题，这会产生歧义吗？

wbhsky · 发表于 2011-9-22 10:12:57

UPUP

wbhsky · 发表于 2011-9-25 23:55:49

UPUP

kylinhtq · 发表于 2011-9-26 00:04:34

这样不平行啊少年。。除非是JAzz XXX and composer XXX

wbhsky · 发表于 2011-9-26 00:22:15

啊，哈哈是这样，谢谢咯

lxsabrina · 发表于 2011-10-9 14:04:52

因为出现了who was所以wordy。而d就是把头衔放在人名前面，连同位于都算wordy了，想象一下，我们平常也会说professor Smith，差不多就是这意思。

-- by 会员 cynthia1991 (2011/9/19 13:29:13)

但是OG44也是用同位语来解释某人的身份，为什么44题的可以，这里就不可以了？
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