弱问新prep210

yunshishow

210 By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.
A.    their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging
B.    from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
C.    to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging
D.    in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges            
E.    to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market, which ranges
答案E，这里的to 10 percent from 6 percent是插入语么？插入语的话前后应该用逗号隔开吧，像这样读起来怪怪的。

houhaibo528

the company will increase  to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market, which ranges...
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the company will increase its share of the country's $21 billion book market(which...) from 6 percent to 10 percent.
这样比较清晰
目的状语吧

210 By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.
A.    their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging
B.    from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
C.    to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging
D.    in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges            
E.    to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market, which ranges
答案E，这里的to 10 percent from 6 percent是插入语么？插入语的话前后应该用逗号隔开吧，像这样读起来怪怪的。

-- by 会员 yunshishow (2011/9/15 16:33:46)

yunshishow

谢谢回复哈。
但是这里to 10 percent from 6 percent应该不是表示目的的吧，应该是表示increase的程度吧。我就觉得这部分应该被逗号隔开，否则整句话不大通顺。