Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.
Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.
A.Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted
B.Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both
C.Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted
D.Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted
E.Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both
请注意both... and ... 这一平行结构,前后形式应该对称。E 选项应改成rooted both in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and in the stride-piano tradition of Duke Ellington;此外“Willie与Duke的钢琴跳跃弹奏法的传统”和“Willie的弹奏传统与Duke的弹奏传统”意思不完全相同。