GWD有两道题不懂！很急！求教各位NN~

balapupu

但是谁能给我讲讲A为什么对呢？C重复主语我知道，去掉中间的but on hearing, in 1609, that such an optical instrument had been made,不就是逗号连接两句话了？？不就是run on 了?

anguslu24

但是谁能给我讲讲A为什么对呢？C重复主语我知道，去掉中间的but on hearing, in 1609, that such an optical instrument had been made,不就是逗号连接两句话了？？不就是run on 了?

-- by 会员 balapupu (2011/8/10 14:21:10)

C不可以，因为缺少谓语。
Galileo, even though he had not invented the telescope, on hearing, in1609, that such an optical instrument had been made, he
首先不同意去掉中间的，宁可移项看结构：
even though he had not invented the telescope, in1609, Galileo on hearing that such an optical instrument had been made,he
可见由三个短句组成，需要两个连词，但这里只有even though一个。再者Galileo on hearing that ... 这个没有谓语，所以杀掉

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