GWD 1-2

cheungxiemin

E 语感为先

XIAOTINGTING

我选B

jason_jufe

仁兄,我们做的是语法题,语感不是万能的.

E: increase to .... from....可以用, 并且which很清晰地指代market.

而B的which指代不明.逻辑错误

Rhetorical construciton.

jason_jufe

http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&lr=&newwindow=1&q=%22increase+to+10+percent+from+6+percent%22

这是我在google上收到地句子.

是New York上地.

保证increase to.. from...可用.

guojing_1979

为什么A 不对？

mangzi99

看了一下午,还是不明白

miricale

从最优选项的角度总结一下B和E:

1.B的不合适之处有两点:A.WHICH可以跳跃修饰,但答案E同时符合代词就近指代和逻辑意思明确两条原则,在这一点上E更优;B.in the country的位置在意思上有歧义(参见以前的帖子);

2.E的不合适之处有一点:from..to..结构倒装,不是不可以用,但与B相比不太符合习惯用法;

无论从数量和性质来说，B的不合适之处更多更大一些,因此应该选E

supermary

 I choose D.

It's a pronoun problem. The company will increase its, not their. "Company" is a singular antecedent. so it has to be "its"... So choose BDE

B and E are essentially the same, just with the information in a different order.  In both of them,"increase" is too far away from "shares". In E, "to 10 percent from 6 percent" is very awkward,e.g.when we tell our clients the increase of something, we always say "from ...to ...pct", right?
D got a nice structure: Idea(share), more info (from 6 to 10), idea (market), more info (which...)In addition,"in" goes with increase and share... it works with that verb and noun.

hhdty

我本来选E,看了一下午大家的讨论,就一会儿觉得是E,一会儿觉得是B.总共14页,每一页都讲得有道理

现在是彻底晕菜了

hsummer

LS哥们你太可爱了