og12 sc 88 求解 求NN们啊，谢谢啦~~~~~！！！！不胜感激涕零~！！

bob9603

如题~
88.Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and
composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the
stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and
Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from
the mainstream jazz repertory.
(A)Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and
composer, produced a body of work both rooted

(B)Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer,
produced a body of work that was rooted both

(C)Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk,
who produced a body of work rooted

(D)Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk
produced a body of work that was rooted

(E)Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk
produced a body of work rooted both


为什么选D呢，我觉得B挺好的啊，又有both and  ，还没有who was（wordy）
求NN们解答啊，谢谢啦~！！！！！！
最好每个选项都说一下，谢谢啦~！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！

nemiah

both in ... and in .... 而且这里也不需要both

Trisica

错在BOTH,这里不需要BOTH

jj449

lz有没有仔细看OG的解释啊，先看OG的解释才是正道啊~

意韵甜心

both...and...两个“...”部分要一致，原句的意思是TM的作品从俩人那里发展的，非要加both也应该是：
Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and
composer, produced a body of work rooted in the
stride-piano tradition of both Willie (The Lion) Smith and
Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from
the mainstream jazz repertory.

另外，用从句修饰也没有直接说Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk简洁有力，主语TM跟后面的谓语动词Produced离得越近越好

bob9603

both in ... and in .... 而且这里也不需要both

-- by 会员 nemiah (2011/7/14 21:59:00)

我的意思是B中的both能不能说是并列willie smith 和 duke ellington 这两个人名~是不是说in the stride-piano tradition of 这部分属于这两者共有的，所以both应该出现在of 之后？

bob9603

错在BOTH,这里不需要BOTH

-- by 会员 Trisica (2011/7/15 4:49:00)

我的意思是B中的both能不能说是并列willie smith 和 duke ellington 这两个人名~是不是说in the stride-piano tradition of 这部分属于这两者共有的，所以both应该出现在of 之后？

bob9603

lz有没有仔细看OG的解释啊，先看OG的解释才是正道啊~

-- by 会员 jj449 (2011/7/15 7:05:41)

谢谢提醒哈O(∩_∩)O，我看过og上的解释，但是觉得这题再做能做对，但就是想知道这个both怎么放才正确~

我的意思是B中的both能不能说是并列willie smith 和 duke ellington 这两个人名~是不是说in the stride-piano tradition of 这部分属于这两者共有的，所以both应该出现在of 之后？

bob9603

both...and...两个“...”部分要一致，原句的意思是TM的作品从俩人那里发展的，非要加both也应该是：
Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and
composer, produced a body of work rooted in the
stride-piano tradition of both Willie (The Lion) Smith and
Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from
the mainstream jazz repertory.

另外，用从句修饰也没有直接说Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk简洁有力，主语TM跟后面的谓语动词Produced离得越近越好

-- by 会员 意韵甜心 (2011/7/15 9:50:35)

你的解释我很满意啊~！谢谢啦，但我就是有个小问题，虽然Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk简洁有力，但咱们平时的感觉，不都是像B那样介绍人嘛？（ps：我有点凭感觉了这里~麻烦指点一下~）O(∩_∩)O

意韵甜心

both...and...两个“...”部分要一致，原句的意思是TM的作品从俩人那里发展的，非要加both也应该是：
Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and
composer, produced a body of work rooted in the
stride-piano tradition of both Willie (The Lion) Smith and
Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from
the mainstream jazz repertory.

另外，用从句修饰也没有直接说Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk简洁有力，主语TM跟后面的谓语动词Produced离得越近越好

-- by 会员 意韵甜心 (2011/7/15 9:50:35)

你的解释我很满意啊~！谢谢啦，但我就是有个小问题，虽然Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk简洁有力，但咱们平时的感觉，不都是像B那样介绍人嘛？（ps：我有点凭感觉了这里~麻烦指点一下~）O(∩_∩)O

-- by 会员 bob9603 (2011/7/15 10:19:39)

所以简洁有力还不是排除他的理由，Both才是~~如果遇到特恶心的题，这个答案是最不恶心的，both那也没有硬伤的话（注意看我改了Both的位置哦），B这种表达也没问题。