GWD-TN-1-Q2争议题提问，关于某个地方语法笔记的地方存在疑问

雪梦儿

By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.
A.    their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging
B.    from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
C.    to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging
D.    in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges            
E.    to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market, which ranges

a market ranging这里笔记里说是错误的，可是如果是a market ranging from。。。的做前面market的同位语，感觉GMAT挺喜欢这么用的啊

jameshzd

同位语 是用 that ，如果改成 a market that ranges from 才是对的。

jameshzd

ranging 是分词修饰 noun 的时候，不会把这个 noun 单独取出来。同位语 that 才可以的。

雪梦儿

这样子。。。好像有点道理，谢谢啊~~~~~

nemiah

Ls的说法不太理解哦，能在解释一下吗?

gracelovesmile

可是 请问E哪里不对啊？？？

yjjfly

这道题我的理解是company是单数，所以应该是its share而不是their share, 因此AC排除，D选项的第一个单词in用法不对，我查了一下increase的用法，我觉得这个地方不应该加in；E选项我觉得先说to再说from时间顺序不对，之前在OG上看到说要是想清楚表达一件事，应该按照时间顺序叙述，所以就选B了，不知道想法对不对，轻拍喔

Increase用法：
if you increase something, or if it increases, it becomes bigger in amount, number, or degree [≠ decrease, reduce]:
[Look up a word starting with D or S for samples of headword or sentence pronunciations on the LDOCE CD-ROM] The population increased dramatically in the first half of the century.
[Look up a word starting with D or S for samples of headword or sentence pronunciations on the LDOCE CD-ROM] political tensions that might increase the likelihood of war
[Look up a word starting with D or S for samples of headword or sentence pronunciations on the LDOCE CD-ROM] Visits to the site have increased threefold since May.
increase in value/price/importance etc
[Look up a word starting with D or S for samples of headword or sentence pronunciations on the LDOCE CD-ROM] Investments are certain to increase in value.
increase (something) by something
[Look up a word starting with D or S for samples of headword or sentence pronunciations on the LDOCE CD-ROM] Food prices increased by 10% in less than a year.
increase (something) from/to something
[Look up a word starting with D or S for samples of headword or sentence pronunciations on the LDOCE CD-ROM] The salary is £18,600 a year, increasing to £23,000.