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kiwii

1.        Although films about the American West depict coyotes as solitary animals howling mournfully on the tops of distant hills, in reality these gregarious creatures live in stable groups that occupy the same territory for long periods.

(A) films about the American West depict coyotes as solitary animals howling mournfully on the tops of distant hills

(B) in films about the American West coyotes are depicted to be solitary animals that howl mournfully on the tops of distant hills

(C) coyotes are depicted as solitary animals howling mournfully on the tops of distant hills in films about the American West

(D) films about the American West depict coyotes as if they were solitary, mournfully howling animals on the tops of distant hills（A）

(E) films about the American West depict coyotes to be solitary and mournfully howling animals on the tops of distant hills

我做题两遍，每次都选C. 谁来批判一下

dreadpower

   

选项C：in films修饰上容易引起歧义，不如A好，且和后面的in reality不对称

              被动语态不如主动好

kiwii

谢谢斑竹。

jjyune

解惑！