以下是本人综合了前辈的意见总结的,和各位分享~不对的还请指教 (A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
1)them can not refer to "book illustrations". in her book illustrations is in paranthesis and we should be able to remove the content of the subordinate clause without impacting the mail clause. However, "them" has no reference if in her illustrations is removed. The antecedent to a pronoun in the main clause of the sentence cannot occur only in phrase in paranthesis. 引自以下连接: http://www.urch.com/forums/gmat-sentence-correction/98158-beatrix-potter-her-book-illustrations.html 2)A Moun and Its modifier should touch each other-摘自曼哈顿 carefully coordinating them with her narratives 中间有插入语无法直接修饰Beatrix Potter
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter carefully coordinating them with her narratives 夹心修饰,会有做book illustration的定语的可能。
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations Carefully coordinated 在逻辑意思上需要修饰book illustrations,但是在位置上却是修饰的 Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations Carefully coordinated 在逻辑意思上需要修饰book illustrations,但是在位置上却是修饰的 Beatrix Potter