一个关于从属问题的小疑问

orchid347

Last spring a Colorado health department survey of 72 playgrounds in private child-care centers found unsafe conditions in 95 percent of them and they ranged from splinters to equipment near collapse.

A)..
B) conditions in 95 percent were unsafe and ranging
C) the ranging of unsafe conditions in 95 percent of them to be
D) that 95 percent hadunsafe conditions ranging
E) that 95 percent of them had conditions that were unsafe; the range was
安全排除ABC
勉强选的D，可是我没弄明白，D里95%是谁的95%呢？我觉得它也不太对啊。求解答，多谢！！

orchid347

唉。。。自己顶一下。。。

Kb24

first of all, agree that D is correct.
2nd, I believe logically it should be: 95% of the playgrounds: 95% of the playgrounds in private child-care centers had unsafe conditions...
between playgrounds and child-care centers, i vote for the former because the survey was targeting at the former...

mzz831

个人愚见，欢迎拍砖～同意LS，是95%的playground.因为前面已经说的很清楚了是调查playground，然后found后面接that引导宾语，95percent可以做代词主语，和one一样～

orchid347

HOHO谢谢你们

zyzrafa

那E错在哪里呢 是wordy么 求教~

jaze

那E错在哪里呢 是wordy么 求教~

-- by 会员 zyzrafa (2011/5/5 5:36:37)

them 无指代
分好错误，the range指的是谁不清楚

zyzrafa

那E错在哪里呢 是wordy么 求教~

-- by 会员 zyzrafa (2011/5/5 5:36:37)

them 无指代
分好错误，the range指的是谁不清楚

-- by 会员 jaze (2011/5/5 8:47:12)

谢谢啦