【求助狂】og12 101 105 129， 分词时态？

kingarthur00

105.
Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and
OG A: use of the present progressive form of the verb confuses the sentence of time with respect to the past tense of the main verb.
Q1:根据上述解释，是不是如果 coordinating变成having coordinated，那么在“现在分词时态”知识点上就没错误了？（暂时不提分词短语的修饰问题）

同理，
OG12-101
Heavy commitment by an executive to a course of action, especially if it has worked well in the past, makes it likely to miss signs of incipient trouble or misinterpret them when they do appear.
(E) Being heavily committed to a course of action, especially one that has worked well in the past, is likely to make an executive miss signs of incipient trouble or misinterpret them when they do appear.
Q2：如果有这么个选项也是对的？：Having been heavily committed to a course of action, especially one that has worked well in the past, was likely to make an executive miss signs of incipient trouble or misinterpret them when they do appear.
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0G12-129
Cajuns speak a dialect brought to southern Louisiana by the 4,000 Acadians who migrated there in 1755; their language is basically seventeenth-century French to which has been added English, Spanish, and Italian words.
(A) to which has been added English, Spanish, and Italian words
(B) added to which is English, Spanish, and Italian words
(C) to which English, Spanish, and Italian words have been added
(D) with English, Spanish, and Italian words having been added to it
(E) and, in addition, English, Spanish, and Italian words are added
OG D:having been added to it is wordy expression
Q3:问什么wordy呢？
偶的理解是，现在分词完成式的被动语态“having been done ”在做时间状语时候与过去分词“ done ”相同，但是此时having been done应该是定语吧，所以having been done相对done就不wordy啦！            
PS:偶没看having been done 的相关讨论，自私的说  
     想拍我的，拍之前给个having been done的链接，自私的再曰

lonelyorchid

你想问啥，还是想说啥？

kingarthur00

0G12-129
Cajuns speak a dialect brought to southern Louisiana by the 4,000 Acadians who migrated there in 1755; their language is basically seventeenth-century French to which has been added English, Spanish, and Italian words.
(A) to which has been added English, Spanish, and Italian words
(B) added to which is English, Spanish, and Italian words
(C) to which English, Spanish, and Italian words have been added
(D) with English, Spanish, and Italian words having been added to it
(E) and, in addition, English, Spanish, and Italian words are added
OG D:having been added to it is wordy expression   为什么wordy？

kingarthur00

105.
Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and
OG A: use of the present progressive form of the verb confuses the sentence of time with respect to the past tense of the main verb
为什么confuses呢？

lonelyorchid

129,说实话，这个选项我根本就直接忽略了。。。如果一定要问，我觉得应该是因为with sb doing这种独立结构太没有必要了吧。。。独立结构通常不是一个好的结构，但是好处在于可以说一件与主句没有关系的事情。但是这里把宾语作为独立结构的主语，然后再用被动形式。。。

lonelyorchid

动词的事态的时间点由主动词体现，延续性由动词的分词形式体现。但是因为非谓语动词没有主动词，所以 was doing和is doing的非谓语形式都是doing，时态分不清。
另外，习惯上，如果有多于2个状语，通常是：状语 主语 状语 谓语 宾语 状语的顺序，很少有把多个状语摞在一起的。。。

阿汤

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,

我觉得这里confuses的是 coordinating的修饰对象，因为前面有两个名词Beatrix Potter，her book illustrations。
混乱了不知道到底是哪个协调了图和故事。

OG的英文解释我看得也有点混乱。“使用现在进行时的动词形式混乱了句子关于过去时态主要动词的时间”这样翻译有没有问题？没有问题了话，我怎么看不懂意思。。。求NN

http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_SC/thread-241145-1-1.html 这个是之前的狂人们对这题的分析讨论。


0G12-129 俺不确定
with这个词不是也有“与……在一起的”的意思吗？add to  加上 这不是意思重复了？

mongmong

105.
Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and
OG A: use of the present progressive form of the verb confuses the sentence of time with respect to the past tense of the main verb.
Q1:根据上述解释，是不是如果 coordinating变成having coordinated，那么在“现在分词时态”知识点上就没错误了？（暂时不提分词短语的修饰问题）
[不是哦，首先我说不出来having coordinated这种改法对不对，即使是对的，Ａ也是好啰嗦，特别是OG指出的主语和谓语离太远]

同理，
OG12-101
Heavy commitment by an executive to a course of action, especially if it has worked well in the past, makes it likely to miss signs of incipient trouble or misinterpret them when they do appear.
(E) Being heavily committed to a course of action, especially one that has worked well in the past, is likely to make an executive miss signs of incipient trouble or misinterpret them when they do appear.
Q2：如果有这么个选项也是对的？：Having been heavily committed to a course of action, especially one that has worked well in the past, was likely to make an executive miss signs of incipient trouble or misinterpret them when they do appear.
好好的一般时态你为何要把它变成这样？！
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0G12-129
Cajuns speak a dialect brought to southern Louisiana by the 4,000 Acadians who migrated there in 1755; their language is basically seventeenth-century French to which has been added English, Spanish, and Italian words.
(A) to which has been added English, Spanish, and Italian words
(B) added to which is English, Spanish, and Italian words
(C) to which English, Spanish, and Italian words have been added
(D) with English, Spanish, and Italian words having been added to it
(E) and, in addition, English, Spanish, and Italian words are added
OG D:having been added to it is wordy expression
Q3:问什么wordy呢？
偶的理解是，现在分词完成式的被动语态“having been done ”在做时间状语时候与过去分词“ done ”相同，但是此时having been done应该是定语吧，所以having been done相对done就不wordy啦！
［这部分我真的不了解了，added比having been added好？但不知这样意思上是不是意思上不对？］
           
PS:偶没看having been done 的相关讨论，自私的说  
     想拍我的，拍之前给个having been done的链接，自私的再曰

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