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Dressed as a man and using the name Robert Shurtleff, Deborah Sampson, the first woman to draw a soldier's pension, joined the Continental Army in 1782 at the age of 22, was injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she had become too ill to serve.

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发表于 2011-2-12 01:27:55 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
36. Dressed as a man and using the name Robert Shurtleff, Deborah Sampson, the fi rst woman to draw a soldier’s pension, joined the Continental Army in 1782 at the age of 22, was injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she had become too ill to serve.

(B) 22, was injured three times, while being discharged in 1783 because she had become
(C) 22 and was injured three times, and discharged in 1783, being
(D) 22, injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she was
(E) 22, having been injured three times and discharged in 1783, being

答案是A,我选了D。
没觉得D哪里不对?
大家帮我分析下吧~D哪里错了?
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沙发
发表于 2011-2-12 01:33:45 | 只看该作者
(D) 22, injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she was

and was discharged,这里不对。
板凳
发表于 2011-2-12 01:38:22 | 只看该作者
and前后不对称
地板
发表于 2011-2-12 09:13:32 | 只看该作者
injure要用被动语态,她不可能自己伤害自己,而是“受伤”。joined, was injured, and was discharged三句并列。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-2-12 11:19:20 | 只看该作者
injure要用被动语态,她不可能自己伤害自己,而是“受伤”。joined, was injured, and was discharged三句并列。
-- by 会员 cutenancymyn (2011/2/12 9:13:32)


 我是这样看的,(Dressed as a man and using the name Robert Shurtleff,)(the first woman to draw a soldier’s pension, )不看了~
我的理解是:Deborah Sampson, joined the Continental Army in 1782 at the age of 22, injured three times(这个也是一个插入成分,修饰DS的,可忽略不看了), and was discharged in 1783 because she was too ill to serve.

整句话就是:DS joined the Army and was discharged in 1783.(这个好像没什么错误……)
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-2-12 11:21:31 | 只看该作者
and前后不对称
-- by 会员 kazemi (2011/2/12 1:38:22)



(Dressed as a man and using the name Robert Shurtleff,)(the first woman to draw a soldier’s pension, )这都是修饰成分,跳过不看了~
我的理解是:Deborah Sampson, joined the Continental Army in 1782 at the age of 22, injured three times(这个也是一个插入成分,修饰DS的,可忽略不看了), and was discharged in 1783 because she was too ill to serve.

整句话就是:DS joined the Army and was discharged in 1783.(这个好像没什么错误……)
这句话的and前后应该没什么矛盾
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-2-12 11:22:04 | 只看该作者
(D) 22, injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she was

and was discharged,这里不对。
-- by 会员 希望 (2011/2/12 1:33:45)



(Dressed as a man and using the name Robert Shurtleff,)(the first woman to draw a soldier’s pension, )不看了~
我的理解是:Deborah Sampson, joined the Continental Army in 1782 at the age of 22, injured three times(这个也是一个插入成分,修饰DS的,可忽略不看了), and was discharged in 1783 because she was too ill to serve.

整句话就是:DS joined the Army and was discharged in 1783.(这个好像没什么错误……)
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发表于 2011-2-12 15:18:20 | 只看该作者
become,go,remain,come是GMAT语法中不能变掉的词,俗称四大天王。XDF笔记。记住哦!
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发表于 2011-2-12 16:29:20 | 只看该作者
[/quote]

(Dressed as a man and using the name Robert Shurtleff,)(the first woman to draw a soldier’s pension, )这都是修饰成分,跳过不看了~
我的理解是:Deborah Sampson, joined the Continental Army in 1782 at the age of 22, injured three times(这个也是一个插入成分,修饰DS的,可忽略不看了), and was discharged in 1783 because she was too ill to serve.

整句话就是:DS joined the Army and was discharged in 1783.(这个好像没什么错误……)
这句话的and前后应该没什么矛盾
-- by 会员 听sophie (2011/2/12 11:21:31)

[/quote]
我之前好像也选的是这个选项,不过现在我想的是:injured three times如果要修饰DS最好紧靠DS,在这个选项里离DS太远了,白勇语法笔记里面说,修饰语要尽可能靠近修饰对象,D选项中injured three times的这个位置导致它可能就近修饰吧。如果要是把它理解成状语的话,那么后面的and was discharged里面没有主语。
我也不是很确定是不是正确,看你能接受这个看法不?
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-2-12 16:29:55 | 只看该作者
become,go,remain,come是GMAT语法中不能变掉的词,俗称四大天王。XDF笔记。记住哦!
-- by 会员 evelyn205205 (2011/2/12 15:18:20)



记下了!XDF笔记也是很多精华滴!
谢谢evelyn~
become,go,remain , come~
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