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原来中介都是默认不写optional essay的啊~晕死!

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11#
发表于 2010-12-12 16:33:16 | 只看该作者
optional essay本来就不用写
optional essay只是说明为什么你GPA低 或者其他分数很低的原因
GPA上了三都没必要写 写多了反倒不好。。。。
你们不懂就别抱怨了
-- by 会员 yangqianlei (2010/12/12 16:28:32)



看来您很懂嘛
12#
发表于 2010-12-12 16:33:31 | 只看该作者
LZ跟我状况一摸一样。。。后果大家都知道了。。。还好tulane我也不是特别想去。。。
13#
发表于 2010-12-12 16:33:54 | 只看该作者
尽量做到最好吧,optional本来就是个option,他的价值由你自己决定
14#
发表于 2010-12-12 16:34:26 | 只看该作者
我也没有那么想去,可是。。。实在懵掉了。。。
15#
发表于 2010-12-12 16:34:59 | 只看该作者
对!!!我也是!!!哭死了我。。。这个礼拜这样就被两个拒了。。。
-- by 会员 fannybeibei (2010/12/12 16:31:47)



怎么追究中介责任啊我在想?
-- by 会员 蚍蜉1989 (2010/12/12 16:33:16)


我想我们没办法追究吧。。。只能吃进了。。。
16#
 楼主| 发表于 2010-12-12 16:37:50 | 只看该作者
哎!要怪只能怪自己懒!   我今晚打算把所有申请的学校都重新注册一下,进去看看到底有什么花样!
17#
发表于 2010-12-12 16:44:28 | 只看该作者
尽量做到最好吧,optional本来就是个option,他的价值由你自己决定
-- by 会员 figoliuxi (2010/12/12 16:33:54)

、。。。好专业。。哈哈
18#
发表于 2010-12-12 16:56:37 | 只看该作者
optional essay本来就不用写
optional essay只是说明为什么你GPA低 或者其他分数很低的原因
GPA上了三都没必要写 写多了反倒不好。。。。
你们不懂就别抱怨了
-- by 会员 yangqianlei (2010/12/12 16:28:32)

姑娘你能这么想,真乃中介和DIY同学的福音…
19#
发表于 2010-12-12 17:01:27 | 只看该作者
optional essay本来就不用写
optional essay只是说明为什么你GPA低 或者其他分数很低的原因
GPA上了三都没必要写 写多了反倒不好。。。。
你们不懂就别抱怨了
-- by 会员 yangqianlei (2010/12/12 16:28:32)






看来您很懂嘛
-- by 会员 夏舞葵影 (2010/12/12 16:33:16)




我擦 你不懂你叫个毛啊
好吧 既然你们都不懂 我就把写Optional Essay的tips转到这里
有很多东西不明白的时候要懂得自己去寻找答案 姐可没空跟你耍嘴皮子 OK?
给所有DIY还有找中介的同志们参考一下吧
希望对你们有帮助!


HOWTO WRITE THE OPTIONALESSAY
Okay gang, much hasbeen written about  the OptionalEssay.  And today, we willcontribute to that pool of knowledge.  But we will as always do itcleverly, briskly, and not without our special brand of PE humour.  

Behold: the first ever Guide to the OptionalEssay.

1) Speak to the facts.  As we all have heard countless times,the key to the OptionalEssay is to explain WHY you bombed the GMAT.  Whyyou did so badly at college.  The adcom already knows THAT you did--sohere you can tell them a story.  I did A badly in college, but the reasonsare B and C.  Since then, Ive done D and E.  See that?  Noproblems here.  Just the facts, gang.  No long-winded, circularstories.

2) Dont write unless you have to.*  As most of us know, this is NOTa chance to slip in a new essay for the adcom's viewing pleasure. "Well I havent written about community service yet, so..." Nope.  Bad idea--this will force the adcom to question your judgment. Now that being said, there are two exceptions to this rule--Johnson andCBS.  Those apps are so frickin short, we DO recommend perhaps writing anadditional short essay.  But these two are the ONLY exceptions we areaware of.  

3) Speak with Confidence.  This is the only one that seems to trippeople up.  The last thing that an adcom wants to read is another whinyexplanation as to why you blew the GMAT.  After youve written your firstsentence, they KNOW where the essay is going.  We HATE to spend all 500 wordson this essay if we can help it--get in there, make your point, and getout.  If you are not sorry, if you dont apologize--that is perfectlyFINE.  All you need is some clear logic--make the point, and get out ofthere.  Speak with confidence, and dont dwell.  This should be theshortest essay that you write.  eriod.

Hope this helps gang.

Jon Frank

HBS 2005
20#
发表于 2010-12-12 17:50:35 | 只看该作者
LS其实是正解

我在拿自己optional essay给美国长大, 现在在UM念PHD的表哥看的时候, 他也说optional essay是用来解释那种obvious weakness的,比如,低于3的GPA等等, 不需要再陈述自己的强项。
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