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United States Senator Daniel Inouye was appointed to several posts within the Democratic party during his first term, that included assistant majority whip and vice-chair of the Democratic Senatorial Committee.

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发表于 2010-10-20 14:18:24 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
A mixture of poems and short fiction, Jean Toomer's Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever written by Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man (E)

B.Black Americans—including Native Son by Richard Wright and Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison

E.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright's Native Son and Ralph Ellison's Invisible Man
为何B不对??我觉得black americans确实应该用复数吧?多谢大家!
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发表于 2010-10-20 16:45:02 | 只看该作者
分析一下这个结构:the three best novels ever written by a Black American
其中ever written by a Black American作为后置定语修饰novels表示这些novels的特征
而这个特征正是被“一个美国黑人写的”而不是被“很多美国黑人写的”
准却说明了每一本书都是被一个人写的,而非合作的结果

实战中不可能考虑这么多细节

本题在BE中取舍方法为
B中的including从语法上讲可能作后置定语修饰Black Americans,也可能作状语修饰前面的句子。
但这两种可能都不合逻辑
1、including修饰Black Americans,错误
2、including作状语逻辑主语为Jean Toomer's Cane,同样错误
因此排除B,取E。
板凳
发表于 2010-10-20 20:33:46 | 只看该作者
这个讨论了很久,我觉得lz最好在讨论帖中找找解释~~
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2010-10-21 21:44:43 | 只看该作者
多谢1楼的解答!!二楼的同学,我之前找过讨论帖,但是我用的是10月份最新的那版1.05的,题号对不上。。。
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发表于 2010-10-29 09:47:43 | 只看该作者
一楼对including 的评价是错误的,including 虽然用逗号隔开,但是不同于其它的分词-ing结构的用法,它是可以跨越任何对于主句宾语的修饰结构,只修饰主句的宾语的,例题
United States Senator Daniel Inouye was appointed to several posts within the Democratic Party during his first term, that included assistant majority whip and vice-chair of the Democratic Senatorial Committee.
A.    that included
B.    which includes
C.    including
D.    some of which were
E.    among them being

reference: GMAT-Prep-2008 Q187
这道题不可以用including 是因为including 必须要全部包括所有the three best novels,而并不是其中的某几项,everyone not just a part of
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发表于 2010-11-5 23:08:39 | 只看该作者
这道题在划线的前面部分已经表示的很清楚:Jean Toomer's Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever written by...

因为Jean Toom是一个人,所以不存在Black Americans的歧义,应该是a Black American. 而three best novels决定了后面的部分应该是小说的书名作为对应。答案是E.

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发表于 2010-11-25 14:54:52 | 只看该作者
这道题在划线的前面部分已经表示的很清楚:Jean Toomer's Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever written by...

因为Jean Toom是一个人,所以不存在Black Americans的歧义,应该是a Black American. 而three best novels决定了后面的部分应该是小说的书名作为对应。答案是E.

-- by 会员 angela7258 (2010/11/5 23:08:39)




为什么一本书只能被一个人写??
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发表于 2011-6-8 15:11:09 | 只看该作者
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A mixture of poems and short fiction, Jean Toomer’s Canehas been called one of the three best novels ever written byBlack Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man.



A.Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man

B.Black Americans—including Native Son by Richard Wright and Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison

C.a Black American—including Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man

D.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man

E.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright’s Native Sonand Ralph Ellison’s Invisible Man

首先,主语是one of…written by,所以要用a black amaricans.
其次,one of 不可能including…
再次,破折号后面接the others being是常见用法
(白勇P8)可以引出:做补充说明的句子或短语、同位语、插入语、列举的事物。
Nytimes 例子:
Out of five sales advertised to be held only one resulted in a sale -- all the others being adjourned.

A panel of thirty was exhausted, out of whom but five were sworn--four of the others being peremptorily challenged, and twenty-one being set aside for cause.

而且特别注意,前面有数字提示,of 30 people4 wasthe others being很常用
Five of the workmen had to be released by the firemen- the others being able to get out themselves;

最后,而且书名大多用所有格表述,且与前面一致
Along with Richard Wright’s Native Son and Ralph Ellison’s The Invisible Man, publication of Jean Toomer’s creative montage Cane (1923) was a defining moment in Harlem’s era of artistic experimentation.

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发表于 2011-6-15 19:49:37 | 只看该作者
LS清楚!
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发表于 2013-3-13 20:54:09 | 只看该作者
顶一下~~ 7楼说的哈清楚~~~~ written by是修饰主语的,这点弄清楚 就好理解了
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