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tianwan

Socially and environmentally responsible investing is on the rise:  last year in the United States, over $2 trillion was invested in funds that screen companies according to a variety of criteria such as adherence to labor standards, protection of the environment, and observance of human rights.

according to a variety of criteria such as

according to a variety of such criteria, as by

according to such a variety of criteria as by

in accordance with such a variety of criteria as

in accordance with a variety of criteria, such as by

偶觉得A的according to 有逻辑主语的问题， D没有逻辑主语的问题。

请NN发表高见。

jnlvo

according to 是有修饰对象歧义的感觉。

dreadpower

   不懂，二位能说具体点吗？？according to还能修饰什么？？请教

    有人认为a variety of criteria such as和such a variety of criteria as意思上有区别，二位觉得呢？？

weiyu

Socially and environmentally responsible investing is on the rise:  last year in the United States, over $2 trillion was invested in funds that screen companies（这两个可能是according的逻辑主语）但是逻辑意思要求funds according to a variety of criteria such as adherence to labor standards, protection of the environment, and observance of human rights.

我想Tianwan是说：分词短语要考虑逻辑主语问题，而介词短语就不用。

JerryGuan

俺认为according to 不需要逻主一致，在句子中修整个句子，一般位于句首，也有位于句尾，句中，用逗号隔开。

本句，我也不明白。

大全里35-55，共21题，可以参考下。

大全35： According to a panel of health officials, there has been a great deal of confusion in the medical profession about whether obesity is a biological disorder posing serious health risks or a condition more related to appearance than to health.

(A) about whether obesity is a biological disorder posing serious health risks or a condition more related to appearance than to

(B) with respect to obesity being a biological disorder posing serious health risks or if it is related more to appearance than

(C) over whether or not obesity is a biological disorder posing serious health risks or it is a condition more related to appearance than to

(D) about obesity and if it is a biological disorder posing serious health risks or a condition related to appearance more than to（A）

(E) concerning whether obesity is a biological disorder posing serious health risks or it is a condition related to appearance more than

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-4-26 14:30:10编辑过]

mariezhu

可是according这儿好像不能视为分词啊

dreadpower

  参看kingsoft:

according to
prep.
a list arranged according to the alphabet.
按字母顺序排列制成的表格

参看LONGMAN上：according to        preposition

According to the police, his attackers beat him with a blunt instrument. （介词短语作状语）

You will be paid according to the amount of work you do.（介词短语作状语）

screen companies according to a variety of criteria such as

此外LONGMAN上注释：in accordance with something
（formal） according to a rule, system etc

也就是说，LONGMAN认为in accordance with something意思上=according to sth

但是in accordance with something用与正规场合，是不是有这个问题？？

dreadpower

   UP，according to sth是介词短语,不是分词短语

tianwan

A和D有什么不同吗？based on短语就是错的吗？偶们在讨论ETS的思路。偶觉得ETS不喜欢according。

dreadpower

   谢谢tianwan兄不厌其烦的回我的帖

   我大概的总结几点，请指正：

  1。ETS一般将according to放于句首，偶尔放句尾，做状语

  2。我觉得according to和in accordance with在这里目的都是要作screen 这个动作的状语

3。...such as...和 such...as...来看，ETS偏好后者