大老晚的提问不好意思，希望明早有人看到可以回答

GabrielHong

Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power, while in Germany it is just over 33 percent
A. while in Germany it is just over 33 percent
B. compared to Germany, which uses just over 33 percent
C. whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy produced in Germany
D. whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comes from nuclear power in Germany
E. compared with the energy from nuclear power in Germany, where it is just over 33 percent
答案是C
我做这题时，先很快把A、E、D排除了。但是在C、D中作出选择时。我觉得两个都没有明显语法错误，但D选项的主语是33 percent of the energy ，与主句的相同，所以我选了D。希望大家能指点一下，告诉我选C的原因

vivickyvi

这是OG上的解释 我直接贴过来了
Rhetorical construction; Logical predication

This sentence compares percentages and uses the
prepositional phrases in France and in Germany to
distinguish the percentage of energy in each
country coming from nuclear power. This
information is most efficiently and clearly
presented in two clauses joined by the conjunction
whereas, which signifies a difference between the
situations in the two countries. Each clause must
identify what the percentage refers to—that is,
the portion of the respective country's energy that
comes from nuclear power.

AWhile is somewhat ambiguous, since it
might indicate simultaneity rather than
contrast; the referent of it is ambiguous,
raising questions about just what two things
are being compared.

BThis sentence compares 75percent to
Germany; it is not clear what 33percent
refers to.

CCorrect. The two clauses joined by whereas
indicate clearly that the comparison is
between the different percentages of energy
coming from nuclear power.

DThe use of the definite article the makes it
seem as though the energy being referred to
in this part of the sentence is that of France.


是说如果选D 句子的含义就变成:法国75%+的ENERGY 来自NP. 而33%的(法国的)ENERGY来自德国NP.不知道理解的对不对表达的清不清楚, 虽然我也觉得这题很扯...

EThis construction is wordy and unclear; the
referent of it is ambiguous.

The correct answer is C.

花子落落

有人问过了的~你搜一下~

GabrielHong

我不怎么会搜，你能不能帮我搜一下，然后把链接给我啊，谢谢。