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330.Having the right hand and arm being crippled by a sniper’s bullet
during the First World War, Horace Pippin, a Black American painter,
worked by holding the brush in his right hand and guiding its movements
with his left.

(A) Having the right hand and arm being crippled by a sniper’s bullet during the First World War

(B) In spite of his right hand and arm being crippled by a sniper’s bullet during the First World War

(C) Because there had been a sniper’s bullet during the First World War that crippled his right hand and arm

(D) The right hand and arm being crippled by a sniper’s bullet during the First World War

(E) His right hand and arm crippled by a sniper’s bullet during the First World War



答案是E， 不太明白 D 和 A， 这是 OG 的解释：

“ In choice D, The should be His, and being should be omitted. ”



是不是说 being 实际上是存在的， 但是应该省略， 那么being是个什么成分呢？

一直对句子里的 “being” 很糊涂， 请大家给详细讲讲好么?

另外， “The”　为什么要改成 “His” 呢？



谢谢

tianwan

D，the可能指不是他的arm。

A，1，have sth done固定搭配，being多余，同时have sth done有主动请别人做的意思，逻辑含义错。

cocoabean

再问NN:   Choice B is awkward and changes the meaning of the original statement: the point is that Pippin's method of painting arose because of, not in spite of, his injury. ??

1. 是不是ETS认为因果关系更好, 但E也没有体现因果关系呀?,

His right hand and arm crippled by a sniper’s bullet during the First World War 做整个句子的什么成分,

arm后省略了which were?

2. 总觉得读起来应该是转折关系更好,尽管他受伤了, 但仍然通过...工作,唉, 中国人的习惯思维, 总喜欢这样表扬模范. 还有没有其它类似的例子,与中国人的思维不怎么一致的?

请指教!  Many thanks

JerryGuan

以下是引用cocoabean在2004-4-23 23:28:00的发言：

再问NN:   Choice B is awkward and changes the meaning of the original statement: the point is that Pippin's method of painting arose because of, not in spite of, his injury. ??

1. 是不是ETS认为因果关系更好, 但E也没有体现因果关系呀?,

His right hand and arm crippled by a sniper’s bullet during the First World War 做整个句子的什么成分,

arm后省略了which were?

2. 总觉得读起来应该是转折关系更好,尽管他受伤了, 但仍然通过...工作,唉, 中国人的习惯思维, 总喜欢这样表扬模范. 还有没有其它类似的例子,与中国人的思维不怎么一致的?

请指教!  Many thanks

您所说的红字部分是同一个问题：这层关系，是转折，还是因果，我也读不出来。 好像两者都可以啊，不过除E外其他选项都有问题。请NN补充~~~

红字部门中间的黑字是另一个问题：我觉得是独立主格，修饰主语~~~

tianwan

pumpkin总结得好。

3,偶觉得还是一个独立主格。N+过去分词短语。

JerryGuan

pumpkin的思路很清晰，不过，我有一些不同的意见，提出来接受批评。

1、因果还是转折。从句子的意思上，没办法读出来；可能因为我语感不太好。但从本句来看：

1）虽然右手断了，他还是用右手握笔，左手指挥；此为转折

2）因为右手断了，他用右手握笔，左手指挥；此为因果

2、独立主格。作用是修主语。

前面好像记得有一个朋友提出来把E答案的修改意，我找不到这个贴子了。

1）其中的His改成The 行不行？得到回答：不能改为 the，改了就不知道是谁的手。

2）再问，His改为with行不行？回答：改为With应该可以的。

我个人认为，以上改为with是可以，只是改前，his是用来修主语；而with短语应该是作为整个句子的伴随。

请其他NN批评！

gmat700+

这题我还没有搞明白，所以还要再问。

330.        Having the right hand and arm being crippled by a sniper’s bullet during the First World War, Horace Pippin, a Black American painter, worked by holding the brush in his right hand and guiding its movements with his left.

(A) Having the right hand and arm being crippled by a sniper’s bullet during the First World War

(B) In spite of his right hand and arm being crippled by a sniper’s bullet during the First World War

(C) Because there had been a sniper’s bullet during the First World War that crippled his right hand and arm

(D) The right hand and arm being crippled by a sniper’s bullet during the First World War（E）

(E) His right hand and arm crippled by a sniper’s bullet during the First World War

答案E应该算是个独立主格成分。但是对照大全959：

959.        Child care already a solid part of the employee benefits package at many companies, more businesses are focusing on a newer family benefit known as elder care, servicing for older dependents.

(A) Child care

(B) With child care

(C) Child care as

(D) Being the Child care was（B）

(E) With child care’s being

959的A选项难道不是和330的E选项如出一辙吗？为什么330可以直接用n.+过去分词的独立主格结构，而959就不能直接用n.+n.的独立主格结构呢？

cocoabean

顶顶, 同问, 难道ETS认为 同为独立主格, with + N +N 的形式比 N+N 的形式要好嘛?

GMATCRACKER1983

是这样的ＷＩＴＨ　可以加强主句与独立主格之间的联系～！

angelovevil

说说偶的意见：

His right hand and arm crippled by a sniper’s bullet during the First World War，Horace Pippin

这里的人跟手有很明显的所属关系－－他的手跟胳膊，或者His right hand and arm 前面加个with就更清楚，不加也挺明白，而

Child care already a solid part of the employee benefits package at many companies, more businesses 中

Child care前面如果不加上with，就与more businesses 关系脱节了。不知道说的对不对，第一次在这里发贴，请NN多指教。