大全609 D选项未问过~很疑惑~~

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1.Revered by an ill-informed citizenry, the Duke of York was feted opulently for several months before there was denunciation and exile.
(A) there was denunciation and exile
(B) he was to be denounced with exile
(C) being denounced and exiled
(D) denunciation and his exiledenunciation and his exile

(E) being exiled, having been denounced

答案是C。

我对D选项很有疑惑。为何D错了？？大全的注释上说是denunciation 和his exile不平行，因为EXILE有的限制词HIS。。。而DENUNCIATION没有。。。我对这个说法持怀疑态度。。我觉得这两者是平行的。。有没有哪位大牛能证实一下这个说法。。或者说D选项有其他错误？？我觉得D选项是不是因为BEFORE后面跟的不是一个句子所以错了呢？

请大牛指点。。


QUESTION 2: C选项去掉BEING对吗？

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jtrchina

我对D选项很有疑惑。为何D错了？？

D错在以下几处
1.平行。denunciation and his exile GMAT对平行结构要求更严格，区别于日常英语语法。GMAT中要使其正确，所有格his应提前：his denunciation and exile。
2.逻辑语义。denunciation and exile动作是对Duke 发出的，而非Duke 的所有物

QUESTION 2: C选项去掉BEING对吗？
不对。Being清晰表明了被动，去掉后有变主动的语义错误：
Revered by an ill-informed citizenry, the Duke of York was feted opulently for several months before ( the Duke of York was) being denounced and exiled,主谓相同的省略形式
若去掉Being，句子可还原为：
Revered by an ill-informed citizenry, the Duke of York was feted opulently for several months before （the Duke of York） denounced and exiled，主语省略形式，被动语义被改变，产生歧义

Hope it helps!

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我对D选项很有疑惑。为何D错了？？

D错在以下几处
1.平行。denunciation and his exile GMAT对平行结构要求更严格，区别于日常英语语法。GMAT中要使其正确，所有格his应提前：his denunciation and exile。
2.逻辑语义。denunciation and exile动作是对Duke 发出的，而非Duke 的所有物

QUESTION 2: C选项去掉BEING对吗？
不对。Being清晰表明了被动，去掉后有变主动的语义错误：
Revered by an ill-informed citizenry, the Duke of York was feted opulently for several months before ( the Duke of York was) being denounced and exiled,主谓相同的省略形式
若去掉Being，句子可还原为：
Revered by an ill-informed citizenry, the Duke of York was feted opulently for several months before （the Duke of York） denounced and exiled，主语省略形式，被动语义被改变，产生歧义

Hope it helps!

-- by 会员 jtrchina (2010/5/21 10:17:19)

D选项我明白了。。但是C选项我还是有疑问。。
我记得OG上有一题就是NOUN+being+过去分词的结构，不好，直接用NOUN+过去分词就好了。


还有这题如果说要用BEING，那么为何这题前边的REVERSED不加BEING呢？

即为何不改成：Being revered by an ill-informed citizenry, the Duke of York was feted opulently for several months before ( the Duke of York was) being denounced and exiled,

jtrchina

Q:直接用NOUN+过去分词就好了

N+ed其实是N+ (that be) + ed的省略形式，省后更简洁，且无歧义(因为只有that be才能一起省略，必表被动)

Q:还有这题如果说要用BEING，那么为何这题前边的REVERSED不加BEING呢？

因为单独REVERSED一词即可无歧义地表清楚被动，主动只能是REVERSING，故省略Being后不会产生歧义
反观原题before处，省略Being后会产生主动【before （the Duke of York） denounced and exiled】的歧义，区别就在这里

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Q:直接用NOUN+过去分词就好了

N+ed其实是N+ (that be) + ed的省略形式，省后更简洁，且无歧义(因为只有that be才能一起省略，必表被动)

Q:还有这题如果说要用BEING，那么为何这题前边的REVERSED不加BEING呢？

因为单独REVERSED一词即可无歧义地表清楚被动，主动只能是REVERSING，故省略Being后不会产生歧义
反观原题before处，省略Being后会产生主动【before （the Duke of York） denounced and exiled】的歧义，区别就在这里

-- by 会员 jtrchina (2010/5/21 10:43:36)

这。。。。。。。。为什么会这样。。。。。。

你很牛啊···真的···佩服佩服··明白了。。。
THANKS VERY MUCH！