OG_SC 249, 疑问

rebuscat

249. Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style （were influential on generations of bluegrass artists. was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia. whose music differed significantly from his own）.
我觉得这个句子有问题。按B改，则此句不完整，没有谓语和宾语。因为 influence 和 inspire 均修饰whose 从句的主语 repertory, views and vacal style.
(A)    were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from
(B)    influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from
(C)    was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, was also inspirational to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was different significantly in comparison to
(D)    was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, who included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, the music of whom differed significantly when compared to
(E)    were an influence on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was significantly different from that of

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siebel

这样写是不是更清楚、容易理解一点：Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe's repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style....

However, it's a little clumsy. Actually, whose here can be treated as a kind of "emphasizing". means: 张三，就是他的烟灰缸引发了这场核战争。

rebuscat

siebel 你比喻得很贴切，解了我大半疑惑，但
恕我愚笨，这样合乎语法吗？它不同于 it is ...这样的强调句。因为whose 引导的是从句，而主要没有谓语和宾语呀？

Robin

这句话的主语应该是whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style，
Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe应该是修饰主语的，来表明是谁的repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style
个人看法，继续讨论

siebel

给你一问，偶也糊涂了。待偶去查查故纸堆，找一两个例句来支持一下...

joywzy

这句的主句是. Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from

中间插的是从句.

wubin

Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe(subject)
whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style（定语从句中的三个主语。views此处是名词不是动词） influenced on generations of bluegrass artists.（定语从句）
also  inspired many musicians（谓语和宾语）
including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia. whose music differed significantly from his own.（伴随状语）

rebuscat

wubin 一讲，到提醒了我，就是因为一个also, 给我搞胡涂了。如果有also, 就表示一个主语的两种结果，既不仅影响influence，而且给予灵感inspire， 因为有also。
当然我比较笨，但我先只当also 不存在。
joywzy, 我知道是从句，但是因为有了also, 好像从句包括了后面整个部分。

江南天阔

WUBIN的对。

rebuscat

thank you all.