请教一题目OG249

kelvinyan

249. Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style were influential on generations of bluegrass artists. was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia. whose music differed significantly from his own.

(A)  were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from

(B)   influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from

(C)  was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, was also inspirational to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was different significantly in comparison to

(D)  was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, who included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, the music of whom differed significantly when compared to

(E)   were an influence on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was significantly different from that of

OG中说In C, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia improperly modifies many musicians，为何此句不恰当的修饰many musicians，难道只是因为that不引导非限制性定语从句吗？为何B中including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia,可以修饰many musicians？先谢了！

tianwan

that不可以作非限制定语从句引导词，所以that的出现导致逗号前的东东成了插入语，that修饰插入语前面的东东。

kelvinyan

tianwan先谢了.白勇对此点的解释是musicians included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, 逻辑意思不符合,不太懂,还有高手能解释吗?

kelvinyan

没有高手解释呀!

tianwan

No, in C, the that clause can only modify bluegrass artists. How can the that modify musicians a comma away?

jetrong

我不是高手!我们一起交流

1。THAT是不可以用在非限定性定语从语中的，这是确定的

2。including 是介词，引导的介词短语修饰musicians，请看LONGMAN：

used to introduce something or someone that is part of a larger group or amount you have just mentioned
反义词是 excluding。

例：The price is £25.50, including postage and packing.

You'll need a variety of skills, including leadership and negotiating.

kelvinyan

jetrong,tianwan多谢二位,jetrong对including的解释比较合理.

JerryGuan

以下是引用kelvinyan在2004-4-9 18:16:00的发言：

tianwan先谢了.白勇对此点的解释是musicians included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, 逻辑意思不符合,不太懂,还有高手能解释吗?

BY的意思是：即便认为非限定性是合理的，把that换成先行词，你写出的那句话还是不对，不符合语法；即便认为是插入语，那么that 后面的included应该是一个过去分词，而非一般过去式，如果加上were也荒廖

including的用法是固定的，背下来，别太多争论。

Tiangel

以下是引用tianwan在2004-4-11 14:48:00的发言：
No, in C, the that clause can only modify bluegrass artists. How can the that modify musicians a comma away?

想知道B. influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from  到底是修饰musicians or artists?

个人意见觉得还是应该修饰many musicians，不知对否，请指教，谢谢~

kurtzhou

以下是引用tianwan在2004-4-9 17:59:00的发言：
that不可以作非限制定语从句引导词，所以that的出现导致逗号前的东东成了插入语，that修饰插入语前面的东东。

非常同意tianwan的观点，杨鹏难句教程里有个经典句子就是这种用法，贴出来供大家参考

One such novel idea is　that (idea) of inserting into the chromosomes of plants discrete genes that are not a part of the plants’ natural constitution：specifically，the idea of inserting into　　nonleguminous plants the genes，if they can be identified and isolated，that fit the leguminous plants to be hosts for nitrogen-fixing bacteria. Hence，(there is ) the intensified research on legumes。

that clause修饰the genes,"if they can be identified and isolated"被两个comma隔开是插入语。

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