请教PREP破解 33 谢谢大家。。。。~~~

fay009

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More than 300 rivers drain into Siberia's Lake Baikal, which holds 20 percent of the world's fresh water, more than all the North American GreatLakes combined.



(A) More than 300 rivers drain into Siberia's Lake Baikal, which holds 20 percent of the world's fresh water, more than all the North American Great Lakes combined.
(B) With 20 percent of the world's fresh water, that is more than all the North American Great Lakes combined, Siberia's Lake Baikal
has more than 300 rivers that drain into it.
(C) Siberia's Lake Baikal, with more than 300 rivers draining into it, it holds more of the world's fresh water than all that of the North American Great Lakes combined, 20 percent.
(D) While more than 300 rivers drain into it, Siberia's Lake Baikal holds 20 percent of the world's fresh water, which is more than all the North American Great Lakes combined.
(E) More than all the North American Great Lakes combined, Siberia's Lake Baikal, with more than 300 rivers draining into it, holds 20 percent of the world's fresh water.


答案选择A，我想选择D。不知道D为什么不可以。

spz316

D改变句子中心了吧,加了一个WHILE。原本是一个简单句。加WHILE之后变成复合句了···（仅谈下个人观点）

fay009

嗯。。这是一个说法。。

不知道有没有其他的语法上的错误~~~~~？？

切尔西

D选项中的Which就近修饰world's fresh water, 但是逻辑意思上是说这个湖的水量

amcrystal

我觉得A好像不是一个完整的句子啊....

kiwifoodtown

lz，这里想提醒一下，More than 300 rivers drain into Siberia's Lake Baikal，是主句，是中心，但D选项中它被降格为从句，这样就是大大的改变了原有中心意思，这是语法结构中的大错。

rylstar01

(A) More than 300 rivers drain into Siberia's Lake Baikal, which holds 20 percent of the world's fresh water, more than all the North American Great Lakes combined.
(D) While more than 300 rivers drain into it, Siberia's Lake Baikal holds 20 percent of the world's fresh water, which is more than all the North American Great Lakes combined.

作者的意图是想说，多于300条河流入S。它有世界20%的水，比G的总和要多。
A的句子成分，主句+which 定语从句+ 独立主格(more than all the North American Great Lakes combined)；其中的独立主格部分是对20 percent of the world's fresh water修饰。也就是说A的句子结构完整了。

D的话，如5楼kiwifoodtown所说的，将主句降格了从句。另外，句中 20 percent of the world's fresh water, which is more than all the North American Great Lakes combined这部分的话，使得fresh water与Lakes（ all the North American Great Lakes combined）进行了比较，从逻辑上来看，这是不符合道理的

zandai

切尔西 发表于 2010-3-27 22:14
D选项中的Which就近修饰world's fresh water, 但是逻辑意思上是说这个湖的水量

不要误人子弟哦，最后一个more的副句就是修饰water的；且应该是跳跃修饰了20%的water；D的问题是把主句降级为从句且创造了原本不存在的转折含义。