见过语法差的~~没见过像我语法那么差的~~急寻解释~~GWD8~~在线等

zhaoyusee

LZ表灰心，藕GWD SC曾经错过10哦。。。

-- by 会员 venus2elva (2010/3/26 23:04:46)

你是那篇华丽丽瘦身的楼主吗~~呵呵，我也是4.8号考哦~~~你是曾经~~而我是一直保持在8，9个~~~~错的太别多~~~疯了~~~呜呜呜~~~~

zhaoyusee

5.In the mid-1970’s, since birds were overcome by pollution, and routinely falling from the sky above Los Angeles freeways, this prompted officials in California to devise a plan that reduced automobile emissions.

A.    since birds were overcome by pollution, and routinely falling from the sky above Los Angeles freeways, this prompted officials in California to devise a plan that reduced
B.    same as A
C.    birds had been overcome by pollution and routinely fell from the sky above Los Angeles freeways, prompting officials in California to devise a plan that reduced
D.    birds overcome by pollution routinely fell from the sky above Los Angeles freeways, prompting officials in California to devise a plan to reduce
E.    birds overcome by pollution and routinely falling from the sky above Los Angeles freeways, were prompting officials in California to devise a plan to reduce
这题我读的很别扭，我明白是说鸟都死翘翘了，加州政府就起草计划减少污染。可是这个句子读着感觉有问题，所以就选了A，因为从逻辑看来，鸟的掉落是原因，计划为结果，那么句子的重心为计划。但答案为D，有nn能帮忙解释下这个句子的结构吗~~和为什么A是错的，D是对的~~？？

-- by 会员 zhaoyusee (2010/3/25 17:47:39)

A里面有一个明显的语法错误and routinely falling这一部分缺少谓语

-- by 会员 hughlv (2010/3/25 19:48:25)

当时我也是这样想的~~但是~~后来我又想到~~不能改变句子重心这一条~~~那D的句子重心不就改变了吗

-- by 会员 zhaoyusee (2010/3/25 20:09:31)

D选项的结构从语法角度讲是分词从句作伴随状语，表结果。也就是说后面的计划制定是鸟掉下来的情况导致的一个结果。因此整句的逻辑结构并没有改变。

-- by 会员 hughlv (2010/3/25 23:05:34)

我明白了~~觉得自己语法好差啊~~继续学习！！！！

yawei5252

D项改变了原文的初衷，原文强调的是each，关于GMAT语法公理中讲到原文中作为强调的词绝对不能换，所以应该排除D、E，不过我感觉each a 这个结构有点怪怪的，有each question 但没听说过each a question，，，但是没办法，gmat语法是选的effectiveness of expression。。。

chengcheng0820

看看那个prep 语法笔记吧，然后再做题吧。

-- by 会员 山炮 (2010/3/26 12:21:30)

正在看~~~可是还有好多不懂得~~~都快崩溃了~~~我觉得语法太烂了~！！！

-- by 会员 zhaoyusee (2010/3/27 14:18:53)

我推荐你看你下赵丽的网络课堂，入门那个最有效了。跟着那个学下来，语法就能提高相当大。（做好笔记）

推嫂

一大早看见这个陈年帖子真是有种同病相怜的赶脚，跟楼主错的一样一样的，昨儿做这套题SC错了8个，一看结果整个人都傻了，我可是还有二十天就要考试了的人啊啊啊

GeorgiaHo

hughlv 发表于 2010-3-25 23:08
2.For protection from the summer sun, the Mojave lived in open-sided, flat-topped dwellings ...

但是prep08这里的with是可以修饰前面的noun 嘢， 是这两种情况不同吗？？
with独立主格结构：
由“with        ＋宾语＋宾补”构成的复合结构，在句中可作状语，表示伴随。这一结构中的宾语补足语可由现在分词、过去分词、不定式、形容词、副词或介词短语等来充当：
E.g.: Visitors to the park have often looked into the leafy canopy and seen monkeys sleeping on the branches, with arms and legs hanging like socks on a clothesline.

xiaoyinla

好多波浪线啊。。。看的好累