这道AA 应该怎么写呢

cannahere

没多少思路。。请大家提供一些思路啊

The following appeared in a memorandum from the head of a human resources department at a

major automobile manufacturing company to the company's managers:

“Studies have found that employees of not-for-profit organizations and charities are often more highly

motivated than employees of for-profit corporations to perform well at work when their performance

is not being monitored or evaluated. Interviews with employees of not-for-profit organizations suggest that

the reason for their greater motivation is the belief that their work helps to improve society.

Because they believe in the importance of their work, they have personal reasons to perform well,

even when no financial reward is present. Thus, if our corporation began donating a significant portion

of its profits to humanitarian causes, our employees’ motivation and productivity would increase

substantially and our overall profits would increase as well.”

Discuss how well reasoned . . .etc.

lisa83

我觉得一个是studies 的可信度， 也许它正好是基于非营利组织中的表现良好的员工与盈利组织表现不太好的员工的比较。即调查的样本不一定具有代表性
第二个是攻击因果，认为donating a significant portion
of its profits to humanitarian causes，就一定可以our employees’ motivation and productivity would increase 。有可能还有其他的方式来激励员工。
第三个是攻击结果，即如果都采用这样的不一定our overall profits would increase，有可能会使利润下降等等。（感觉第二点和第三点差不多，呵呵）。

I另外，觉得“interviews with employees of not-for-profit organizations suggest that
the reason for their greater motivation is the belief that their work helps to improve society.
Because they believe in the importance of their work, they have personal reasons to perform well,
even when no financial reward is present.”这句话里面应该还有不对的点，但是又想不明白，帮你顶一下，看其他筒子有啥思路。。

coolhaoming

补充楼上，donate money和为非盈利组织工作并不相同，因为非盈利组织的employees认为他们的工作improve society，而盈利组织做的是捐出部分利润…