4: The principle feature of the redesigned checks is a series of printed instructions that the company hopes will help merchants confirm a check’s authenticity, which include reminders to watch something, compare something-2, and view the watermark while holding the check to the light. ffice ffice" />
B: by including reminders for watching something, comparing something-2, and viewing D: including reminders to watch something, compare something2, and view D的原句可以简化为:The principle feature of the redesigned checks is a series of printed instructions,including reminders to watch something, compare something2, and view the watermark while holding the check to the light. 这样有两个问题: 中间被我省掉的部分太长,会让人以为including 是修饰authenticity. 应该加上一个instructions, 重复一下会比较好。 第二个问题:The principle feature of the redesigned checks is a series of printed instruction that ......., including reminders to watch something, compare something2, and view the watermark while holding the check to the light. holding 的主语到底是什么呢?(顺便说一下while 在这里的用法很不爽。)还是认为这里的holding 有点没着落呀。 不过我也认为MM提到的逗号的问题,加上明显有歧义。现在看哪个答案都不顺眼。
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