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lilei865

Currently , a newrestaurant seems to be built in our community . a few People who oppose this plan believe this construction might have negative effects on our peaceful condition .While I deem the proposed restaurant can bring more benefits than its drawbacks.
Firstly ,a new restaurant is a suitable spot for entertainment . In this increasingly competitive society ,more and more peoplesuffer from huge pressure, which seems particularly so in our community . since no entertainment place located here, It has become a tedious tradition for local people to relax by watching television at home .To change this situation ,a new restaurant is a desperate need. It is not difficult to imagine what a vital role would a new restaurant play in local people’s life: after a long day’s work , they can enjoy many pastimes in the restaurant. they can play cards , watch football games on TV , or even chatting with friends. What’s more, this is a valuable chance to improve the relationship between neighbors.

In the meantime , with the restaurant in our neighborhood, people don’t need to eat less healthy foodany more. Until recently, there are only some street food stands in our community. The food from these stands not only lacks of nutrition, but it is also laden with bacteria. Eating these food when people tied to cook at home, as local people has been wont to do for a long time, is not a lasting solution. A new restaurant , on the other hand , can provide various healthy food , not mention those carefully designed nutrient dishes.
But building a new restaurant is not without its drawbacks. First ,one of the unavoidable results is that a new restaurant may lead to the raising of the crime rate . Some young men , for example , are often convicted of getting dunk and fight in the public. Second-and more generally-, it may make the traffic issue worse, especially during the dinnertime. And people might be trapped by traffic jam sometimes, which may irritate local residents.

lilei865

Currently , a new
restaurant seems to be built in our community . a few People who oppose this plan believe this construction might have negative effects on our peaceful condition .
While I deem the proposed restaurant can bring more benefits than its drawbacks.
Firstly ,
a new restaurant
is a suitable spot for entertainment . In this increasingly competitive society ,more and more people
suffer from huge pressure, which seems particularly so in our community . since no
entertainment place located here, It has become a tedious tradition for local people
to relax by watching television at home .
To change this situation ,a new restaurant is a desperate need. It is not difficult to imagine what a vital role would a new restaurant play in local people’s life: after a long day’s work , they can enjoy many pastimes in the restaurant. they can play cards , watch football games on TV , or even chatting with friends. What’s more, this is a valuable chance to improve the relationship between neighbors.
In the meantime , with the restaurant in our neighborhood, people don’t need to eat less healthy food
any more. Until recently, there are only some street food stands in our community. The food from these stands not only lacks of nutrition, but it is also laden with bacteria.
Eating these food when tied to cook at home, as local people has been wont to do for a long time, is not a lasting solution. A new restaurant , on the other hand , can provide various healthy food , not mention those carefully designed nutrient dishes.
But building a new restaurant is not without its drawbacks. First ,one of the unavoidable results is that a new restaurant may lead to the raising of the crime rate . Some young men , for example , are often convicted of getting dunk and fight in the public. Second-and more generally-, it may make the traffic issue worse, especially during the dinnertime. And people might be trapped by traffic jam sometimes, which may irritate local residents.