OG12-53 A选项的平行问题

fish2006

53. The nineteenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early experiments in his “Essay on Heat and Light,” a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.


(A) a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
(B) a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
(C) a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as well
(D) critiquing all chemistry from Robert Boyle forward and also a vision of
(E) critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of

为什么A选项没有歧义呢？a vision为什么没可能跟all chemistry并列呢？语法上为什么不能看成是批评了all chemistry和a vision呢？谢谢！

sunyan730

critiquing无法定义指代谁？要是做后置定语那他应该指代Essay on Heat and Light，要是做伴随状语则要指代chemist Humphry Davy 。

chemistry和a vision 不能平行。真正平行的是a critique of all chemistry 和a vision of a new chemistry 。


个人拙见，大家批判着看啊

zhongyaya

as well as 就是平行的标志啊，前后的名词是要平行的~chemistry跟 a vision根本凑不到一起去的~

fish2006

烦请详细解释下为什么all chemistry和a vision不平行呢？

bushbreeze

1楼其实已经解释得很清楚了

fish2006

呃

fish2006

1楼其实已经解释得很清楚了

-- by 会员 bushbreeze (2009/11/22 16:18:52)

感谢非常建设性的回复……

我知道为什么critiquing不对，只是不明白为什么chemistry和a vision 不能平行，为什么真正平行的是a critique of all chemistry 和a vision of a new chemistry 。all chemistry和a vision不是两个名词么？恕我愚钝。

fish2006

哦。。。是不是介词短语并列过程中介词习惯补出原则？如果all chemistry和a vision要平行的话a vision前面要加of的吧？也就是说如果是这样写 -
a critique of all chemistry ... as well as of a vision，那就是chemistry和a vision平行了。嗯嗯看起来是这样。请大虾们指点。

moonlolita

楼主，你那样理解的话这句句子意思就不对了，
如果把all chemistry和a vision平行的话，原句不是这个意思

ajassmine

critiquing无法定义指代谁？要是做后置定语那他应该指代Essay on Heat and Light，要是做伴随状语则要指代chemist Humphry Davy 。

chemistry和a vision 不能平行。真正平行的是a critique of all chemistry 和a vision of a new chemistry 。
个人拙见，大家批判着看啊

-- by 会员 sunyan730 (2009/11/18 14:11:38)

真正平行的是a critique of all chemistry 和a vision of a new chemistry 。