请教一道语法题目GWD-8-15 TN24

akatsuki09

GWD-8-Q15:

Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.



A.      Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.  

B.       Clouds form by the Sun’s warmth evaporating the water in the oceans, which rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.

C.      Warmed by the Sun, ocean water evaporates, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form clouds.

D.      The water in the oceans evaporates, warmed by the Sun, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust, which forms clouds.

E.       Ocean water, warmed by the Sun, evaporates and rises high into the atmosphere, which then condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form as clouds.

请问大家，对于ACD这三个有什么样的看法。

AlienX

D的意思不對 -- which指代dust...dust不可能form clouds...
B和E很好排除.
A的被動不如C的主動好
A沒有C的清楚表達a sequence of events
A的"condensing in tiny droplets..."不能修主句

yhwut

看起来应该选C

aaintw

问一下……A中Clouds是主语 C把主语改变成Ocean water了……不算重心和意思改变吗？

hopefulemilyguo

而且c中的to do 应该是表目的吧。。。为什么c对呢~~~~~~

adsdsd

hopefulemilyguo 发表于 2014-5-14 15:35
而且c中的to do 应该是表目的吧。。。为什么c对呢~~~~~~

我记得不定式有一个作用是表结果的

开开心

A选项错误：1，逗号加ing无法修饰逗号前面的名词，它只能修饰前一句的主语或是修饰前面一整个句子。2，ocean’s去修饰water有问题，因为此处没有所属关系，直接用一个名词修另外一个名词即可。3，that从句修饰了water, 整个句子的架构就成了：clounds是形成于evaporation.其实句子的意思是一系列过程成成了云
B选项错误：1， form应该是用被动语态。2， evaporating是后置定语修饰warmth,整个兔子的意思成了：云形成于太阳的热。而实际上是整个过程形成了云，

D选项错误：1，warmed放在了动词之后，修饰不了主语。而且，水是被加热才蒸发，语义上讲也应该在evaporate之前。2，which不能指代前面整句话。而且就算which真的可以指代particles, 那forms也错了，应该用复数形式。
E选项错误：E只看意思就不对，这个句子精简后是：水蒸发并升到空气中。后面的which从句子只是修饰atmosphere.所以，句子意思diverge了