prep sc 语法笔记 ＃9 求助

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9.

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Based
on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to
weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress a statue of the goddess
Athena and that this robe depicted scenes of a battle between Zeus, Athena's
father, and giants.

(A)
Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women
collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress

(B)
Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women had
collaborated to weave a new woolen robe with which to dress

(C)
According to records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated
to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress

(D)
Records from ancient Athens indicate that each year young Athenian women
collaborated to weave a new woolen robe with which they dressed

(E)
Records from ancient Athens indicate each year young Athenian women had
collaborated to weave a new woolen robe for dressing

(A)
young Athenian women作为Based on…的逻辑主语,不符合逻辑; 未划线部分的and that从语法上跟that they used…平行,共同修饰a new
woolen robe, 不符合逻辑.

(B)
逻辑主语错误;未划线部分的and that没有并行的对象; 关系代词which后应该接句子,

(C)
young Athenian women作为According to…的逻辑主语,不符合逻辑;未划线部分的and that从语法上跟that they used…平行,共同修饰a new
woolen robe, 不符合逻辑

(D)
正确,句首没有使用分词短语,有效的避免的逻辑主语问题;indicate that…and that构成了宾语从句的并行结构

(E)
未划线部分的and that没有平行的对象;indicate that的that不能省略;for doing表示目的不及to do有效.

其他都懂，就是不懂关于c选项的解释，为什么young Athenian women作为According to…的逻辑主语,不符合逻辑？？我觉得这个主语没问题阿

谢谢

 

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terryindygo

同问，我觉得C没错啊

zylrt

C.According to records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress...
分词短语在句首，逻辑主语等于句子的主语。
according to这个动作是由each year young Athenian发出的么？显然不是
而是根据这个records from ancient Athens，知道了each year young Athenian...的活动。所以这个题上来就可以把A/B/C三个选项都排除了

sabrinazhang

依照我复习的资料等，我得出一个结论，LZ可以借鉴，但是我目前是这样的搜集，不晓得是不是100%正确，我认为BASED ON，ACCORDING TO的逻辑主语应该都是物品，而不是人，（目前我遇到的题是这样的
后面那个that很明显不能与前面的定语从句并列，并且前面应该用dress with而不是dress

欢迎各位cder拍砖

shallylunn

同问！ 同样是老prep的语法，第31题的正确答案就是
According to some economists, the July decrease in unemployment to the lowest level in two years suggests that the gradual improvement in the job market is continuing.

虽然这个题里according to的部分并没有纳入划线部分，但我觉得这种表达应该是没有问题的。从习惯上来说，过去写文章或者做题，也没有觉得according to后面的部分是accord的主语，一般都是根据资料得到的具体内容。

IVYDOUMOHAN

呃。。。我想问为什么C中and that 与前面的THAT平行，不和逻辑，是因为ROPE重复了？