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foreverlei

额...- -难道我错了...

sunjin1988

MM 你看这题很像你说的 你认为这个E最后这个逗号是不是要省略

The proposed budget includes more than $1 billion in cuts that will shrink the police department through attrition, have halted some ambulance shifts, and have suspended plastic and glass recycling.

A: have halted some ambulance shifts, and have suspended
B: along with halts in some ambulance shifts, and suspending
C: as well as halted some ambulance shifts, and suspend
D: halt some ambulance shifts, and suspending
E: halt some ambulance shifts, and suspend
答案是选E 但是我觉得这个逗号应该省略吧 不省略是不是一定要补出主语的呢？

sunjin1988

按你说逗号不是要连接两个句子吗 ？？？

serendipityh

逗号用法之一: 用逗号和连词同时连接；句子1，and 句子2
                                或者句子1, 句子2, and句子3
in cuts that will shrink the police department through attrition, halt some ambulance shifts, and
    suspend plastic and glass recycling.
不是只要有逗号就要接完整句子.
LZ不要理解错误

[此贴子已经被作者于2009/10/19 1:18:00编辑过]

foreverlei

我是说原题目B选项的逗号后面要完整句子啊...

sunjin1988

谁能帮我回忆下 好像有句话叫什么两个完整句子必须要用逗号连接还是什么的 要加连词 是不是有这个规律？

sunjin1988

哦 我知道了 she is a girl, he is a boy 这句话就是错的 必须加and she is a girl,and he is boy.或者改为she is a girl whose father is a boy.两个完整的主谓结构必须用连词或者改为从句

[此贴子已经被作者于2009/10/19 1:38:17编辑过]

sunjin1988

哈哈 我终于找到原题了 Over the next few years, increasing demands on the Chattahoochee River, which flows into the Apalachicola River, could alter the saline content of Apalachicola Bay, which would rob the oysters there of their flavor, and to make them decrease in size, less distinctive, and less in demand.

A. which would rob the oysters there of their flavor, and to make them decrease in size
B. and it would rob the oysters there of their flavor, make them smaller
C. and rob the oysters there of their flavor,  m a k i n g them decrease in size
D. robbing the oysters there of their flavor and m a k i n g  them smaller
E. robbing the oysters there of their flavor, and m a k i n g   them decrease in size

大家看C 某位NN说C错的原因：除了本身的逻辑错c，如果要用and来连接rob 和alter 构成谓语平行的话，需要把前面的逗号去掉。如果有逗号，就需要重复主语increasing demands on the Chattahoochee River。因为and连接的两个并列分句必须都有自己的主谓宾。省略主语的形式只能是在一个句子里。

这是什么意思？
                            大家不要看了 这种解释错误 

[此贴子已经被作者于2009/10/19 22:10:28编辑过]

foreverlei

是and前有逗号，后面就要补出主语
and前没逗号，如果主语相同就不需要补出吗？

sunjin1988

以下是引用foreverlei在2009/10/19 2:57:00的发言：
是and前有逗号，后面就要补出主语
and前没逗号，如果主语相同就不需要补出吗？

那上面那题那个是不是要补出主语 因为他有逗号啊halt some ambulance shifts, and suspend