PREP2008 189 She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to her native Germany, photographer Lotte Jacobi nevertheless earned a small group of discerning admirers, and her photographs were eventually exhibited in prestigious galleries across the United States. A. She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to B. Being less successful after she had emigrated to New York as compared to C. Less successful after she emigrated to New York than she had been in D. Although she was less successful after emigrating to New York when compared to E. She had been less successful after emigrating to New York than in OG在解释A,E时说“a comma is insufficient to join two independent clauses into a single sentence. ” 不明白错在哪 OG还说“The opening clause She was less successful…. Therefore creates a comma splice if the comma is not followed by a conjunction.”不明白,到底应不应该加逗号,在哪加? -- by 会员 njurenke (2011/1/3 22:45:01)
Comma splices – joining two independent clauses with a comma and no conjunction wrong: She went to the bank, I went to the market. Correct: She went to the bank, and I went to the market. |