GWD-9-22 我这套题就错了2个（高兴死了），但是这个不明白，你来帮忙？

bigbenzhang

Giuseppe Alessi, a world-class chef whose life has been a search for the genuine and the delicious in Florentine cooking, is an accomplished scholar not only unearthing many of his recipes from medieval and Renaissance manuscripts but also a poet and philosopher who draws his inspiration from the idyllic frescoes of Etruscan tombs.

 

1. not only unearthing many of his recipes from medieval and Renaissance manuscripts but also a poet and philosopher who draws
2. unearthing many of his recipes both from medieval and Renaissance manuscripts, as well as a poet and a philosopher who draws
3. who unearths many of his recipes from medieval and Renaissance manuscripts, as well as a poet and a philosopher who draws
4. who unearths many of his recipes from medieval and Renaissance manuscripts, but also a poet and a philosopher drawing
5. who unearths many of his recipes from medieval and  Renaissance manuscripts, a poet and philosopher drawing

这题我以为挺简单的，因为a poet and philosopher是一个人，BCD多了一个不定冠词变成两个人，A不平行，所以就选了E，答案是C. 请教NN

bigbenzhang

怕没人回，自己顶一个！

kaisandy

not only unearthing many of his recipes from medieval and Renaissance manuscripts but also a poet and philosopher who draws his inspiration from the idyllic frescoes of Etruscan tombs.这里的NOT ONLY和BUT ALSO肯定错误了，因为不是2个并列的东西，实际并列的应该是an accomplished scholar和a poet and philosopher ，说的是他又是学者诗人哲学家，然后后面都用一个定语从句去修饰它，二个定语也是并列的，这里考的是并列结构。

我是这么考虑的，不知道你能否接受~

xxxyyyzzz1

原本是平行对称的关系，E变成了有主次的两个句子。重心改变了。C多漂亮啊，平行的多好看啊！！！

Jennifer789

E选项缺少一个连词   

[此贴子已经被作者于2009/10/5 21:57:29编辑过]

bigbenzhang

5楼的回答醍醐灌顶！谢谢！但是a poet and a philosopher 也可以表示既是诗人也是哲人的意思吗？我记得初中就学过这么说不对，自己有本语法书也没找到，就拿来和大家讨论了。

wanglizero

以下是引用bigbenzhang在2009/10/5 22:04:00的发言：
5楼的回答醍醐灌顶！谢谢！但是a poet and a philosopher 也可以表示既是诗人也是哲人的意思吗？我记得初中就学过这么说不对，自己有本语法书也没找到，就拿来和大家讨论了。

是这样额

如果按你“诗人+哲人”的说法，那么原句应该是a scholar and also a poet and philosopher。5楼说的对，这里需要一个连词

若是按照并列来看，Giuseppe Alessi ，is an accomplished scholar ，a poet and a philosopher 这样才构成平行

而C表述的很清楚，a scholar as well as a poet and a philosopher

这样解释不知是否正确，请探讨。