OG11 113

onedayling

71. The original building and loan associations were organized as limited life funds, whose members made monthly payments on their share subscriptions, then taking turns drawing on the funds for home mortgages.
(A) subscriptions, then taking turns drawing
(B) subscriptions, and then taking turns drawing
(C) subscriptions and then took turns drawing
(D) subscriptions and then took turns, they drew
(E) subscriptions and then drew, taking turns

答案C。这个我没疑问。可是我想请问如果c.改为subscriptions and then took turns ,  drawing可以吗？

我一直都搞不清出“V-ing”和“，V-ing”的区别，他们分别指代前面句子的哪个部分？是修饰整句话还是就近修饰名词?

同样的问题还出现在OG11 118里，

Students in the metropolitan school district are so lacking in math skills that it will be difficult to absorb them into a city economy becoming ever more dependent on information-based industries.在becoming 前面加逗号是否可以？如果不可以为什么？

敬候NN指点~

lijiahui0422

这个题不再区分“V-ing”和“，V-ing”的范围内 take turns doing是个搭配，doing不是修饰前面的turns

第二个我觉得不可以，首先建议你先了解一下限定性和非限定性的定语的区别，这里应用限定性定语

另外，加了逗号确实有作状语修饰主语的歧义

关于分词的修饰问题，看了这么多题真是没有放之四海皆有效的法子，选项之间的互相比较很重要

onedayling

以下是引用lijiahui0422在2009/9/8 15:33:00的发言：

这个题不再区分“V-ing”和“，V-ing”的范围内 take turns doing是个搭配，doing不是修饰前面的turns

第二个我觉得不可以，首先建议你先了解一下限定性和非限定性的定语的区别，这里应用限定性定语

另外，加了逗号确实有作状语修饰主语的歧义

关于分词的修饰问题，看了这么多题真是没有放之四海皆有效的法子，选项之间的互相比较很重要

那也就是说",V-ing"是做非限制性定语的对吗？其作用相当于which ?

那我想问下如果不是在take turns doing这个固定搭配存在的情况下。句子结构表现为“....verb+n.+V-ing....”，那这种句子的V-ing是修饰什么的呢？

 

veraonroad

mm，这道题里的took turns drawing中的drawing是take turns doing sth.的用法，并非分词短语做状语，所以不能像你说的那样用逗号隔开。-ving可以有几种用法：1）后置定语，就近修饰名词，经常和定语从句放在一起考。这个时候必须分析逻辑是否通顺；其次根据简洁原则判断 2）固定搭配，比如本题中的用法 3）做状语修饰前面整句话，表伴随、结果等（这种用法一定要分析逻辑，判断意思是否恰当）

你后面举得那个例子，becoming前面不能加逗号，因为做的是定语修饰the city economy，分析句意就是正在变得越来越依赖information-based industries。如果加了逗号放在句尾表伴随，那修饰的就是前面整句话，动作的发起者成了students，显然逻辑不通呀^^

以下是引用onedayling在2009/9/8 14:24:00的发言：

71. The original building and loan associations were organized as limited life funds, whose members made monthly payments on their share subscriptions, then taking turns drawing on the funds for home mortgages.
(A) subscriptions, then taking turns drawing
(B) subscriptions, and then taking turns drawing
(C) subscriptions and then took turns drawing
(D) subscriptions and then took turns, they drew
(E) subscriptions and then drew, taking turns

答案C。这个我没疑问。可是我想请问如果c.改为subscriptions and then took turns ,  drawing可以吗？

我一直都搞不清出“V-ing”和“，V-ing”的区别，他们分别指代前面句子的哪个部分？是修饰整句话还是就近修饰名词?

同样的问题还出现在OG11 118里，

Students in the metropolitan school district are so lacking in math skills that it will be difficult to absorb them into a city economy becoming ever more dependent on information-based industries.在becoming 前面加逗号是否可以？如果不可以为什么？

敬候NN指点~

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