The steel industry has changed radically

albert2008

The steel industry has changed radically over the last two decades, as large, integrated companies such as Bethlehem Steel once conducted operations from mining at one end of the process to shipping at the other have greatly downsized, or in some cases shut down altogether.

 

A.    as large, integrated companies such as Bethlehem Steel

B.    as large, integrated companies, such as Bethlehem Steel, that

C.    with large, integrated companies, such as Bethlehem Steel, that

D.    while large, integrated companies, such as Bethlehem Steel, that

E.     and large, integrated companies such as Bethlehem Steel

请问C为什么不正确？

谢谢？

哈宁

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albert2008

自问自答吧。

C中with后应跟名词，而非从句。

B中as表示因果关系，是原文所要表达之意。

D中while表示同时并列或者转折之意，与原文初衷相悖。

luoluoluo85

a为什么不对呢？

DY567

The steel industry has changed radically over the last two decades, as large, integrated companies such as Bethlehem Steel once conducted operations from mining at one end of the process to shipping at the other have greatly downsized, or in some cases shut down altogether.

A.    as large, integrated companies such as Bethlehem Steel
B.    as large, integrated companies, such as Bethlehem Steel, that √
C.    with large, integrated companies, such as Bethlehem Steel, that
D.    while large, integrated companies, such as Bethlehem Steel, that
E.     and large, integrated companies such as Bethlehem Steel

把句子化简：The steel industry has changed, as large companies (such as...) that conducted operations from.......have downsized, or shut down.


1.as不是“作为”，也不是“像”的意思，更不是表达因果关系，在这里是连词，是连接俩个句子的连词，表是“随着”，CDE排除！
2. have 是动词复数形式前面一个得有个复数的主语，such as 是举例，不能当主语，那么后半句的主语一定是companies.
3. conduct是动词，have也是动词，一个完整的句子怎么能同时出现两个动词而没有任何连词比如and？题目里也没给类似的选项，所以这里就要看看有that的选项是不是对的 AE排除！
4. 那就只剩B了，that就指代companies, large companies （that conducted operations from.......)have downsized, or shut down. 这不是一个完整的句子么？as做连词，再链接前后连个句子，完美！

mzzzzzzzzzz

DY567 发表于 2016-2-24 09:28
The steel industry has changed radically over the last two decades, as large, integrated companies s ...

conducted 为什么不能直接done做后置定语呢？GMAT是鼓励这种用法的 比如The first trenches “cut into” a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence for centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East that were arising simultaneously with but independently of the more celebrated city-states of southern Mesopotamia OG原题

么么哒不能乱用

mzzzzzzzzzz 发表于 2018-1-29 17:28
conducted 为什么不能直接done做后置定语呢？GMAT是鼓励这种用法的 比如The first trenches “cut into” ...

对啊。。我也是这么想的，所以选的A
求哪位大神指点

上官弟弟

么么哒不能乱用 发表于 2018-3-10 17:03
对啊。。我也是这么想的，所以选的A
求哪位大神指点

The steel industry has changed radically over the last two decades,

as large, integrated companies, such as Bethlehem Steel once conducted operations from mining at one end of the process to shipping at the other have greatly downsized, or in some cases shut down altogether.

conducted 与 have downsized or shut down 都是动词。A 是一个run-on sentence。 （串句）英语语法不允许run-on sentence

么么哒不能乱用

上官弟弟 发表于 2018-3-12 11:00
The steel industry has changed radically over the last two decades,

as large, integrated compani ...

那么是因为once导致的conducted不能做定语修饰companies吗？还是说如果是修饰companies的话必须紧跟在companies的后面？

上官弟弟

么么哒不能乱用 发表于 2018-3-12 14:53
那么是因为once导致的conducted不能做定语修饰companies吗？还是说如果是修饰companies的话必须紧跟在comp ...

这样想吧，
a. integrated companies，xx，once conducted..... have greatly downsized, or in some cases shut down altogether.
b. integrated companies, xx, that once conducted .. have greatly downsized, or in some cases shut down altogether.

b 消除了这句子是串句的疑惑