以下是引用pennyrun在2009/8/19 0:06:00的发言：21. According to the Better Business Bureau, if you fail to advertise the highest price in a range of prices for a service or product as prominently as that of the lowest, it violates the New York Consumer Protection Law.
(B) if one fails to advertise the highest price in a range of prices for a service or product as prominently as the lowest price, it (C) failure to advertise the highest price in a range of prices for a service or product as prominently as the lowest C对了，请问B哪里错了？
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According to a study by the Carnegie Foundation for the Advancement of Teaching, companies in the United States are providing job training and general education for nearly eight million people, about equivalent to the enrollment of the nation’s four-year colleges and universities. (A) equivalent to the enrollment of (B) the equivalent of those enrolled in (C) equal to those who are enrolled in (D) as many as the enrollment of（E） (E) as many as are enrolled in E省略了people，这是可以的吗？那还有什么是不能省的啊？ 1. The aristocratic values expressed in the writings of Marguerite Yourcenar place her within the French classical tradition, as does her passionate interest in history, particularly Roman history. (A) as does (B) so do (C) as do (D) so is the case with（A） (E) similarly, does 请问这句话的原意是？？还有就是D为什么错 个人见解，请多多指教。 21） According to the Better Business Bureau, if you fail to advertise the highest price in a range of prices for a service or product as prominently as that of the lowest, it violates the New York Consumer Protection Law. (B) if one fails to advertise the highest price in a range of prices for a service or product as prominently as the lowest price, it (C) failure to advertise the highest price in a range of prices for a service or product as prominently as the lowest C对了，请问B哪里错了？ B选项： 首先： if 的用法是：if A does, B will do,所以时态是不对的，if one fails to advertise the highest price in a range of prices for a service or product as prominently as the lowest price, it（violates） 其次，one用的不对,gmat 语法，要求： pronoun agreement： a pronoun must agree with the noun or pronoun it refers to in person,number, and gender. 也就是说：when one dreams ,you are usually asleep的用法是不对的，one 指代有些含糊不清，而应该是：when you dream, you are usually asleep. 这里也是一样one 用的太模糊了。 233.
According to a study by the Carnegie Foundation for the Advancement of Teaching, companies in the United States are providing job training and general education for nearly eight million people, about equivalent to the enrollment of the nation’s four-year colleges and universities. (A) equivalent to the enrollment of (B) the equivalent of those enrolled in (C) equal to those who are enrolled in (D) as many as the enrollment of（E） (E) as many as are enrolled in E省略了people，这是可以的吗？那还有什么是不能省的啊？ 
可以把，因为 as many as 比较的前后有相同的，后面就可以省了吧，只要不引起歧义就行，我想到个例子是“ the population of A is 40000 people, as many as (that of) B ,没在语法书上查到好的句子，应该可以把。欢迎批评指正 The aristocratic values expressed in the writings of Marguerite Yourcenar place her within the French classical tradition, as does her passionate interest in history, particularly Roman history. (A) as does (B) so do (C) as do (D) so is the case with（A） (E) similarly, does 请问这句话的原意是？？还有就是D为什么错 As does,表达的是什么什么也一样，the aristocratic values 使MY定位在法国古典传统的（研究领域内或是类似的），她对历史的浓厚兴趣也使她定位于。。。。（翻译的有些粗糙。。抛砖引玉啦，大家批评指正～） A 是比较常用的用法，基本上可以算是idiom了，至于D我觉得表达的ambiguity，wordy，而且这种用法没有见过。。 | 
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