[讨论]OG10的解释之"include"

dimajta

这是原题，摘自原来的讨论帖。

249. Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style were influential on generations of bluegrass artists. was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia. whose music differed significantly from his own.
    

(A)  were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from
    

(B)   influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from
    

(C)  was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, was also inspirational to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was different significantly in comparison to
    

(D)  was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, who included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, the music of whom differed significantly when compared to
    

(E)   were an influence on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was significantly different from that of

答案是B，OG对于C的解释是：“in C, ‘that included EP and JG' improperly modifies 'many musicians'.”  先不说其他错误，比如非限定从不用that。为什么解释inproperly modify？that include 和 including有什么细微差别吗？

请nn们路过看看，给个说法。。

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dimajta

lijiahui0422

(C)  was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, was also inspirational to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was different significantly in comparison to
    

因为红色部分不再是修饰成分，为是和前面的系表结构并列，所以that就就进修饰了，如果红色部分是插入语的话那么that included 应该说没什么歧义了

dimajta

谢谢ls，但两个系表结构并列为什么没有用连词连接。而且逻辑意义上看，that应该是说musician，不是bluegrass artists，因为后面提到whose music。

lijiahui0422

 so sorry...my mistake 我结构都没看清楚...春误导你了..

我查了一下og11里面没有解释include的错误

我找了一个例子Do you have an one-day tour that
                includes both of them

also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia,

前者是限定tour的属性，也就是说没有both of them 我就不要了

这个题说鼓舞了很多音乐家，包括...  而不是说鼓舞了很多包括...的音乐家,(不包括他们俩的就不鼓舞)

还是哦有点差别的，that include限定了属性，including表伴随，侧重点不同

希望将功补过啊~~哈