[求助]新PREP1-172 不胜感激~

lk2356

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Introduced by Italian merchants resident in London during the sixteenth century, in England life insurance remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically being ship owners, overseas merchants, or professional moneylenders.

A. in England life insurance remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically being

B. in England life insurance had remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters with their clients, who typically were

C. until the end of the seventeenth century life insurance in England
   had remained a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically

D. life insurance in England
   remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically

E. life insurance remained until the end of the seventeenth century in England a specialized contract between individual underwriters with their clients, who typically were

我主要纠结在C和D之间

C可能 的错误

1.时态有问题，过去完成时不对？

2.因为恰年的introduced by,句子的主语应该尽早出现，所以D优于C

3.介词短语充当的状语“until the end of the seventeenth”提前了，句子应该倒装。但是只要状语提前就一定要倒装么？

是哪一点或者是我没有想到的哪一点，请NN们指点迷津！不胜感谢。

[此贴子已经被作者于2009-4-5 13:55:01编辑过]

AlienX

1. OG/Prep上都有一些題用past perfect tense來強調一個動作從一個不明的時間到另一個時間(the end of the seventeenth century)結束, 所以如果我做題, 我不會因為看見had remained把C crossed out.
2. 我相信是, 因為有一題OG題是unlike X, in Z Y之類的比較結構, OG說in Z令到比較不清, 所以我相信similarly, 這題也是這樣
3. 那裡inverted?

lk2356

谢谢解释got it

ilhht

以下是引用lk2356在2009-4-5 13:53:00的发言：

172.
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Introduced by Italian merchants resident in London during the sixteenth century, in England life insurance remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically being ship owners, overseas merchants, or professional moneylenders.

A. in England life insurance remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically being

B. in England life insurance had remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters with their clients, who typically were

C. until the end of the seventeenth century life insurance in England
   had remained a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically

D. life insurance in England
   remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically

E. life insurance remained until the end of the seventeenth century in England a specialized contract between individual underwriters with their clients, who typically were

我主要纠结在C和D之间

C可能 的错误

1.时态有问题，过去完成时不对？

2.因为恰年的introduced by,句子的主语应该尽早出现，所以D优于C

3.介词短语充当的状语“until the end of the seventeenth”提前了，句子应该倒装。但是只要状语提前就一定要倒装么？

是哪一点或者是我没有想到的哪一点，请NN们指点迷津！不胜感谢。

严重同意，我在GWD上也看到过这样的例子。

caizeen

分词置首，要求逻辑主语对应，所以ABC错

由BETWEEN的用法判断，E错

michelle77

Until置于句首要到装吗？要倒装是部分还是全部？

果汁软糖

分词置首，要求逻辑主语对应，所以ABC错

由BETWEEN的用法判断，E错

-- by 会员 caizeen (2009/5/22 21:41:00)

用逻辑主语对应排除不了ABC的，完全从逻辑意义上来说，ABCDE5个选项的逻辑主语都是对的，不能因为地点状语或者时间状语放在开头就将其当做逻辑主语，将A排除的语法点我觉得应该是being的出现，完全多余，同时地点状语in England的位置确实不好，应该放在修饰对象后面；B可以用between...and来排除，但是同时还有几个错误：时态方面，一般过去式在本题中不如过去完成时好，过去完成时表示一直到the end of....为止life insurance都是存在的，而且老师说过，完成时说明事件对完成时发生的时间点有影响，同时还是有地点状语位置的问题，而且who typically were是多余的；C选项中的时间状语位置同样不好，但是不至于作为决定C错误的点，更重要的应该是时态问题；E选项也可以用固定搭配between... and 来排除，同时who typically were是多余的。

个人意见，仅供参考

suade0904

分词置首，要求逻辑主语对应，所以ABC错

由BETWEEN的用法判断，E错

-- by 会员 caizeen (2009/5/22 21:41:00)

用逻辑主语对应排除不了ABC的，完全从逻辑意义上来说，ABCDE5个选项的逻辑主语都是对的，不能因为地点状语或者时间状语放在开头就将其当做逻辑主语，将A排除的语法点我觉得应该是being的出现，完全多余，同时地点状语in England的位置确实不好，应该放在修饰对象后面；B可以用between...and来排除，但是同时还有几个错误：时态方面，一般过去式在本题中不如过去完成时好，过去完成时表示一直到the end of....为止life insurance都是存在的，而且老师说过，完成时说明事件对完成时发生的时间点有影响，同时还是有地点状语位置的问题，而且who typically were是多余的；C选项中的时间状语位置同样不好，但是不至于作为决定C错误的点，更重要的应该是时态问题；E选项也可以用固定搭配between... and 来排除，同时who typically were是多余的。

个人意见，仅供参考

-- by 会员 果汁软糖 (2009/11/27 22:28:10)

小弟淺見，因為子句說明在十六世紀introduced，然後這個方法一直remained到十七世紀，如果用過去完成，是否會產生remained比introduced來的早歧義，所以才用一般過去式

cannahere

仔细想了想，过去完成时应该是指一个动作在过去的过去那个时间里已经完成了，应该是一个具体的动作，表示一种结果。而remain应该是个连续的状态，用过去完成时看上去不是很舒服。。。个人意见，仅供参考

hetaotao7

这题中In England 在选项中的位置都不一样，难道意思没有区别？？？？