新prep破译 177题求助

newjoshkao

一、

 V-ing本身有正在進行之意思，但是介係詞之後的動詞卻又一定要變形成為V-ing，因此若句意邏輯上為過去式，為了避免使用V-ing造成句意的歧異，可以改成用有完整主動詞的子句或介係詞+名詞的形式來表達。（PP1-99）（PP1-177）--> 因此 by imitating and practicing不好，要用 by imitate and practice.

例如，
   若用 result from….，其後接的是已經發生的事情，因此不喜用V-ing。

               Suffer from + A，
   表示遭受了A（A是已經發生的結果），也不喜用V-ing。這樣表達不好：

               Creatures of the seabed were suffering from
     dwindling food supplies,

                    possibly resulting from increasing sea surface temperatures during the same period.
    

     

             改成這樣較好：Creatures of the seabed were suffering
    because food supplies were dwindling, possibly as a result of an increase in sea surface temperatures during the same period.

二、

….so that….，表示
            因此 (表目的)。與本句的句意不合。

本句句意邏輯應該是 藉由這些好奇心，新的行為模式和表情可以被一個傳給一個。

by which( 指代好奇心) --> by the curiosity, new patterns...(O)

用 so that 就變成 「有好奇心的目的是將新的行為模式和表情一個傳給一個」（怪異）。

三、

陳述事實的動詞時態，用簡單現在時 即可，不需要用未來式。

[此贴子已经被作者于2009-4-28 10:41:29编辑过]

newjoshkao

177.         (24315-!-item-!-188;#058&000969) 動詞時態、修飾語錯誤修飾、語意邏輯連慣性、介係詞＋V-ing會在時態上與句意產生歧異，此時用介係詞＋名詞
        較佳。

 

In her 26 years in the forests of Gombe, Jane Goodall collected data that proved that chimpanzees exhibit the kind of curiosity so that new patterns of behavior and expression can be passed on from each one to others by imitating and practicing

 

A. exhibit（O）the kind of curiosity so that（so that….，表示
            因此 (表目的)。與本句的句意不合。） new patterns of behavior and expression can be passed on from each（累贅） one to others by imitating and practicing（X，句意上沒有正在進行的意思，因此用V-ing的形式不好）

B. will exhibit（基本上在陳述一項事實，用現在簡單式即可） the kind of curiosity so that（so that….，表示
            因此 (表目的)。與本句的句意不合。） new patterns of behavior and expression can be passed on from one to another by imitating and practicing（X，句意上沒有正在進行的意思，因此用V-ing的形式不好）

C. will exhibit
        （基本上在陳述一項事實，用現在簡單式即可）the kind of curiosity so that（so that….，表示
            因此 (表目的)。與本句的句意不合。） new patterns of behavior and expression can be passed on from one to another by imitation and practice（O）

D. exhibit（O） the kind of curiosity by which（O） new patterns of behavior and expression can be passed on from one to another by imitation and practice（O）

E. exhibit（O） the kind of curiosity where（錯誤，where不能指代curiosity） new patterns of behavior and expression are passed on to others by imitation and practice（O）

vincentliew

如果是被证明是某一自然规律或现象,无论前面是过去还是将来,这个规律的内容都用动词原形表示.

vivian0331

以下是引用vincentliew在2009-5-26 17:05:00的发言：

如果是被证明是某一自然规律或现象,无论前面是过去还是将来,这个规律的内容都用动词原形表示.

同意，另外关于by doing和by noun.，我记得在哪里看到过，如果有by后面的这个词有名词形式，就用名词，实在迫不得已再用doing，这样的理解对么？

不过，我也认为，应该从句子中的逻辑主语看by后面的词，如果存在逻辑主动关系，可以用doing。

AlienX

個人認為by doing和by noun本身沒有優劣之分...

zbna5

以下是引用天蝎座1107在2009-4-12 17:31:00的发言：

In her 26 years in the forests of Gombe, Jane Goodall collected data that proved that chimpanzees exhibit the kind of curiosity so that new patterns of behavior and expression can be passed on from each one to others by imitating and practicing
    

 

 

 

A. exhibit the kind of curiosity so that new patterns of behavior and expression can be passed on from each one to others by imitating and practicing 前面都没有什么错误 关键错在by imitating and practicing 它的逻辑主语new patterns是不能主动发出这样的动作 在prep320中也有考到by后面跟doing还是名词 from each one to others不如from one to another好

B. will exhibit the kind of curiosity so that new patterns of behavior and expression can be passed on from one to another by imitating and practicing 比A更好 但是同样错在by imitating and practicing上

C. will exhibit the kind of curiosity so that new patterns of behavior and expression can be passed on from one to another by imitation and practice

D. exhibit the kind of curiosity by which new patterns of behavior and expression can be passed on from one to another by imitation and practice 改变句意 new patterns can be passed on并不是by curiosity而是 前面整个exhibit the kind of curiosity这件事 而且原句强调so that是有个因果关系在里面 这里也削弱了这层意思

E. exhibit the kind of curiosity where new patterns of behavior and expression are passed on to others by imitation and practice关系词用的不对where  少了情态动词can 当原句中有情态动词时 正确选项也是一定要有情态动词的 others在这里指代不清
        

isi

以下是引用AlienX在2009-5-29 23:07:00的发言：
個人認為by doing和by noun本身沒有優劣之分...

agree.

cuishang11

以下是引用zbna5在2009-6-4 11:14:00的发言：

答案是D

newport

D is better than C.

1. "by which" is used to emphasize "curiosity" which is respondent to "the kind of". If "so that" is better, the sentence will be "exhibit curiosity so that..."

2. future tense should be "would" in C

天蝎座1107

以下是引用AlienX在2009/5/29 23:07:00的发言：
個人認為by doing和by noun本身沒有優劣之分...

这个道理我今天才明白

被动语态中同样可以用by doing的 prep320中有一题就是这样