请教P1-191

crespo75

The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.

A. of their not paying back their loans on time,

B. of not paying back their loans on time, a group

C. of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group

D. that they do not pay back their loans on time,

E. that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group

请问这里E的错误是such吗？添了such这叫什么结构？晕死了，B对是因为同位语结构好吗？

AlienX

umm...E中的"such"是沒必要的...
LZ試把它拿走, 含意不變

rogerleex

更严重的错误是用了that结构，做同位语解释record，而实际上，逻辑要表达的是xxx的记录（没还钱的《记录》，不是《没还钱记录》）。