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karenshi89

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Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress that made provision for
the removal of the government of the United
States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C.,
also established the Library of Congress.

    

 

    

A. Approved April 24, 1800, the act of
Congress that made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C.,
also established

    

B.
The act of Congress, which was approved April 24, 1800, making provision for
the removal of the government of the United
States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C.,
also established

    

C.
The act of Congress approved April 24, 1800, which made provision for the
removal of the government of the United States
to the new federal city, Washington,
D.C., and established

    

D.
Approved April 24, 1800, making provision for the removal of the government of
the United States to the new
federal city, Washington, D.C., the act of Congress also established

    E. Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress made
provision for the removal of the government of the United
States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C.,
also establishing

A是对的，但是D错在哪里呢？多谢指点

fighting127

头重脚轻 和A比不好了

蓝色回忆

那B呢?

ilhht

which was approved April 24,

B当中这个超罗嗦，可以用一个过去分词代替的，用少点比较简洁。

天蝎座1107

Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress that made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established the Library of Congress.

A. Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress that made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established

B. The act of Congress, which was approved April 24, 1800, making provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established
        这里that made不可以改成making现在分词

C. The act of Congress approved April 24, 1800, which made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., and established and established前面没有并列谓语错

D. Approved April 24, 1800, making provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., the act of Congress also established that made不可以改成making现在分词

E. Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also establishing彻底改变句子重心

但是我不明白的是A中 also established前面为什么要价格逗号呢? sorry,我总是问很钻牛角尖的问题 但是我得搞明白啊

AlienX

因為"Washington, D.C."是同位語, 而這個同位語是enclosed by two commas

xxxyyyzzz1

请问，有also是不是意味着平行对称？如果用了establishing，不可以理解成伴随着made这个动作的嘛？

谢谢斑竹啊~~~

lyjranchel

以下是引用xxxyyyzzz1在2009-5-1 21:45:00的发言：
请问，有also是不是意味着平行对称？如果用了establishing，不可以理解成伴随着made这个动作的嘛？

谢谢斑竹啊~~~

同问

是不是去掉also就对了呢？

AlienX

umm...沒看出also有什麼問題.
感覺E也沒錯, 只是如5th floor所說 -- 改变句子重心=改變了原意
要小心: "改变句子重心"不是correctiveness的問題, 所以第一輪排除時, 不要用它來判斷...

TINTINGER

D选项的问题，应该是making在句中作状语，但是很容易被误认为修饰Washington DC..