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Despite there being no fundamental difference in shipbuilding traditions in Viking-Age Scandinavia from the ones in other parts of Northern Europe, archaeological evidence shows that Viking ships were lighter, slimmer, faster, and thus probably more seaworthy than the heavier vessels used by the English at that time.
(A) Despite there being no fundamental difference in shipbuilding traditions in Viking-Age Scandinavia from the ones (B) Despite no fundamental difference between the shipbuilding traditions in Viking-Age Scandinavia from those (C) With shipbuilding traditions in Viking-Age Scandinavia not fundamentally different from those (D) With the shipbuilding traditions in Viking-Age Scandinavia having no fundamental difference from the ones (E) Although shipbuilding traditions in Viking-Age Scandinavia were not fundamentally different from those (A) despite there being表达方式错误,应该用连词,despite是介词;tradition是抽象名词,用ones不恰当。 (B) difference in… from …介词搭配错误。 这个B中的in我觉得是 in Viking-Age 一个状语 而不是一个搭配 这样的话B貌似没什么错误 除了介词引导没有连词清楚??=+= 请NN们指正 |